The OrphanageA Story by e.renoldiThis is story my friends and I wrote in middle school. We had 3 different versions, one from each of the 3 main characters point of views. Sorry, but we never actually had a chance to finish, but if you're interested in the plot ending we had just comment or message and I can get that to you. Enjoy! Tick-tock,
tick-tock. Time seemed to continue endlessly
and seemed to stand still. I glanced up
at the clock hanging overhead, tick-tock,
tick-tock. I glanced out the window of our
homely kitchen into the rainy night that had blanketed Detroit in complete wet
and darkness. Every so often I would feel the roar of the thunder and blowing
of the boisterous wind. It was Saturday night and I was
home alone. My parents had just taken my little sister to visit my aunt for a
while. I couldn’t go because I had basketball practice just before they left. Tick-tock,
tick-tock. I sighed as I picked up my
basketball with my name engraved on the side, Dante Kyto, and twirled it on my
index finger. Our team is the best in
Detroit, and I am one of the main
players. Our school, Chadsey High, has had the champion title for the past four
years! I plan to make it five; my dad and I were even considering getting me a
scholarship for college in basketball. I ducked under the doorway to my
room, and stepped inside. It was hard being so tall sometimes. I wandered over
to my desk and sat in the black swivel chair my dad bought from a thrift store.
I was glad my teachers didn’t assign any homework on the weekend; it was pretty
sweet to catch a break once in awhile. I picked my phone up to call my friend
Jared, but laughed to myself-the poor phone looked like a dog had tortured it.
I began to dial when I noticed my phone had a new voicemail. I checked it and it was from my
mom. She told me they would be out for a couple more hours because they were
stuck in horrible traffic. The message ended with her sending my dad’s and
Lita’s love and reminding me to call back. I left a message telling her
everything was good here and I would see them in a little. I set down my phone deciding that I
could talk to Jared anytime I wanted. I wanted to use this time to relax. I
decided to waste the rest of the time just listening to my CD player. Soon the couple of hours they were
supposed to be at my aunt’s turned into four hours, then five. It was already
11:00 so I began to get a little uneasy; they were should’ve been on there way
home hours ago. I reached for my cell phone again. I quickly punched in my
father’s number, “Ring, ring, ri-Hi you’ve reached Steve Kyto. I’m not here so
leave a message-” “That’s weird, he’s not picking
up,” I thought, “he usually always picks up.” A little worried now, I tried my
mom’s number, no answer. “Alright, I’ll call my aunt,” I
decided. “Ring, ring, ring- Hello?” My Aunt
Becca’s hearty voice answered. “Hey, it’s Dante. Can I talk to my
mom?” There was a pause on the line. “Well, they should be home. They
left not but three hours ago…” she replied. “Wha-” I started, but was
interrupted by loud knocking. Knock,
knock. “Aunt Becca, I’ll call you back,” I
quickly said, and ran downstairs. KNOCK,
KNOCK, KNOCK. “Alright, alright, I’m coming,” I breathlessly
yelled on my way down. I ran straight to our decrepit
front door and twisted the knob to reveal a policeman. I thought I was in for it. He was average height and kind of
big, but then again, he probably spent his last couple of hours on duty chowin’
down on donuts and coffee. The police
officer lifted up his hat and his brown eyes speculated me as if I was on America’s Most Wanted. He looked up to me and asked, “Are
you Dante Kyto?” I hesitantly nodded my head. “Son, you need to come with me,” he
stated. “I swear whatever it is, I didn’t
do it,” I said quickly. I expected him to start giving me
the “talk” and handcuff me then and there, but he just stared. Then he finally
spoke, “I’m sorry, I’m really sorry.” He just kept rambling on and on
saying he was sorry. Sorry for what? “Um, officer, what are you talking
about?” I questioned. He didn’t answer for a moment. “Your parents and your sister have
been in an accident, and I’m afraid none of them made it out.” he shook his
head sadly. I couldn’t think, I couldn’t
breathe. The world stopped and I realized, I
was all alone. Crinkled leaves fell from the
painted trees above and landed softly on the sidewalk. I watched them fall, and
fall, until I stopped at a black gate adjacent to a dark gray sign. In the dark
lit by the pale moon, I tried to read the sign, St. Vincent’s- “That’s kind of weird. Why does the
rest of the sign look like it’s been crossed out?” I thought as I read the
rest- Orphanage. I sighed sorry; I couldn’t believe
that so much had been taken away in just one night. I never would have thought
of how much I would miss my little Lita and my mom and dad, it was almost
unbearable the pain I felt. After the officer told me what happened, I guess I blanked
out ‘cause I woke up in a hospital the next morning. The bed reeked of medicine and the room was
so empty; only a table and a counter or two covered the space. “Where am I? What happened?” I
wondered. “My parents and Lita-“ I jumped
out of the bed and ran out the room into the quiet hallway when a large doctor
stopped me. “Where do
you think your going? You need to stay in bed.” He stated calmly. “Screw
that! Where are my parents and my sister?!” I exclaimed. He sighed
and looked at the floor. Not this again, I didn’t want to here it- He looked
up and softly said, “Dante, they’re dead.” I stood
there for a moment, just stood, in the gaudy hospital gown I was wearing. “Son, are you ok?” he reassuringly asked as he brought his
hand to my shoulder for comfort. I couldn’t feel anything, I didn’t feel alive. After a
minute or two, I turned away from the doctor, his hand slowly dropped from and
wandered back into the empty hospital bed. I kept
trying to convince myself that this wasn’t really happening. My whole life was
gone; I just didn’t know what to do. Life could never be the same. Without
word to the doctor or the clerk, I got up and left the room. Nothing was out of
the ordinary, just the regular beeping noises and weird smells; but as I was
walking towards the elevator door, I passed a room that was empty. I had a
strange feeling the person that was in there didn’t make it. I shuddered at the
thought and started to the elevator when I passed another kid from my school. I wasn’t sure I knew him and I
never would’ve looked, but he was in a wheel chair. I’d seen him at school a
couple times, but we never acknowledged each other. He wasn’t exactly the type
of person I would hang around with; we lived in completely different worlds. Yet,
I couldn’t help but feel that at this exact moment, we felt experienced the
same feeling. Lost
and alone. He stopped and we stared at each
other for a moment, his dark eyes questioned my place, and I pondered over his wheelchair.
Though we only stared for a few seconds, it felt like hours. We quickly turned
away and headed in opposite directions. “Just forget it,” I thought, closed
the elevator door and I headed down into my bleak future. It was two weeks since the accident
happened and now I was forced to live in this dump you’d call an orphanage. I
had to get rid of everything in the house. I didn’t want to live there with
constant reminders of what I had just lost in every room and every corner of
the house. During those two weeks, I didn’t go to school. I said good-bye to my
friends just a few hours before I left to the orphanage. It was painful, but I
hoped I would see them soon. I guess at the orphanage, they had their own
school. I didn’t want to stop playing basketball, or let my team down, but I
just couldn’t do it anymore. Saying good-bye to my coach was too much. I
decided to let him find out where I’d gone on his own. Reluctantly, I pushed open the gate
with a sigh and it creaked open. The gate opened to a wilting garden with a
large willow trees shadowing a long winding path leading to a large door. I
hesitantly walked up to the door. “Here we go,” I prepped myself as I
slung my backpack higher over my shoulder. I knocked on the door three times
before a lady with a pinched, wrinkly face and a tight bun flung it open. “Do you have any idea what time it
is?” she fiercely whispered. I didn’t really much about the time
these days, but my guess was around two in the morning. “Um, sorry,” I replied, “I’m Dante Kyto;
I was sent to live here.” Her wrinkled, periwinkle eyes
questioned me for a moment. “Alright, let me get you up to your
room,” she sharply said as she turned and beckoned me to follow her up spiral
stairs that looked like that could fall apart any second. Once we reached the top of the
staircase, she stopped and pointed to a room on the right side of the hallway. “This is your room. You will have
four roommates and you will share a bunk. There is no jewelry, electronics, or
make-up allowed here. If you have any the items listed above, please give them
to me now.” I felt the lump of my CD player in
my backpack as I shifted my weight. “No. I’m pretty sure I don’t.” Again, her eyes suspected me. What
was with this lady? “I am Ms.Wingrif, headmistress and
supervisor of St. Vincent’s Orphanage. If
you have any questions ring the door to my room,” she paused to look at me and
smiled, “Welcome to St. Vincent’s Orphanage.” And with that, she was gone. I silently opened the door and
without bothering to look at who was occupying the beds, I spotted an open
bottom bunk. I set down my bag beside it, slipped into the bed and tried to
fall asleep. Shattered bits of light from the
moon shown through an old, rusty window and revealed a musty room with two bunk
beds and two dressers. The room smelled of dirt and dust. I heard mumbling
above me. It sounded like someone had just muttered the name Vladus. “Who’s Vladus?” I wondered out loud
with a trace of astound in my voice. Strands of black hair dangled down
from the bed above me as a narrow face speculated me; it was the kid from
school I had seen in the hospital. He took one good look at me then
sleepily mumbled, “You’ve got to be kidding me. Of all the preppy ‘Barbie’s, I
was put with you.” I really didn’t feel like taking
his crap right now. “Deal with it,” I spat back. He got down from his bed and in my
face. And here I thought he was too lazy to do anything, much as get up. “What are you trying to say
steroids? I bet your parents died just to get away from you.” I stared at him and observed his
pale face- it almost looked like his eyes were dry from crying. His wrists had
cuts all over them. He looked at me with an almost anxious
face, “Are you going to hit me or what?” I almost smiled, “Cutter, wouldn’t
it just hurt more if I didn’t.” His hand formed a fist and he drew
his arm back- I didn’t really want to fight, but the guy was asking for it.
Just as his fist was about to make contact with mine, the door opened. It was the old lady from earlier,
only fifteen minutes had passed since she let me in, and she didn’t look too
happy. But I don’t think she could look happy if her life depended on it. “You two boys better quiet up soon
or you’ll get no breakfast,” she left the room and slammed the door shut. I sat back down onto the bed and
grabbed my backpack. Right when I went to dig out my CD player, I saw two heads
on the opposite bunk pop up. “I didn’t even notice them before,”
I thought, “They must’ve been sleeping this whole time.” While Cutter slipped back into his
own bed, I decided if I should say hi to those guys. Before I could say
anything, the guy on top with dark, gray eyes and ruffled black hair with
subtle gold streaks beat me to it. “Hey. I’m Vladus, you?” This must’ve been the kid Cutter
was talking about earlier before we started to fight. He looked around our age,
maybe a little older. “Um... I’m Dante. How long have you
been living here?” “Way too long man,” he replied,
“Been trying to get out of here for years and do something with my life.” The other boy stood up and squinted
over me with a frown on his face. Unfortunately, his frown turned into a huge,
dorky smile. “Hi guys. Sorry I didn’t say hello
earlier, I was recharging my brain power. So your name’s Dante, huh? You must
be a really good sportsman and that kind of stuff.” I had only had one word for this
kid, nerd; seems like everything in this place could be described in one word.
He was probably eleven or twelve because his head didn’t come past my elbows. “Who are you?” I was awestruck by
the huge, red glasses he slipped on. “I was given the name George Wilfred Thompson
by my parents whose names are Julie and Fred. They named me after my great
grandpa George because-” “That’s ok!” I stopped him before
he made my ears bleed,” It’s nice to meet you George.” Ah heck. Why’d I even ask? “Well Vladus, George,
nice.uhh…meeting you but I think I’m going to try to get some sleep before
light,” I said. I was really tired, the past couple of days I hadn’t been
getting the best of sleep. “Cool, cool,” Vladus stated,” Just
keep your eyes open for the stocker.” Stocker? “Thanks for the warning,” I
questionably responded. I looked over to my bunk. “Looks
like cutter dozed off,” I thought. I sighed, who would have thought I
would be stuck here with him, of all the people. Things in this place were going
to get a little rough. Vladus looked at me and his eyes
turned darker and darker. “Seriously though bro.” I gulped. “I’ll be sure to,” I stated. We all climbed into our beds and
tried to sleep and I was almost asleep until George’s high voice began,
“Alright, we had all better get a good recharge for tomorrow…” I didn’t hear the rest of what
George said for two reasons. Reason number one, I blocked him out with the
stuffy pillow laid on my bed. And two, I had fallen into a dream with no George
and no cutter, but best of all I was with my family in a place where we all
could stay together. So I fell asleep until about seven
when I heard a loud beeping coming from the black alarm clock set on the
dresser between the bunks. Beep Beep Beep. Even though I wanted
to wake up, there was no way I was going to get up and turn it off. I figured
someone else would. The alarm kept beeping like that for a few minutes. Then
soon enough somebody clicked it off. I
sighed in relief that somebody had turned it off, but wished I hadn’t when I
heard the voice of none other then, George. “Ready for a fresh new day everybody?” Nobody answered. “Time for breakfast, which you should know is the most
important meal of the day!” Vladus sleepily responded, “Which we all know George, you
tell us every freaking morning.” He sat up slowly and jumped down from the bed, and staggered
to the door. The noisy bed creaked as I got up and when I stood up I
noticed Vladus and cutter had nothing on but their boxers. I sighed down at my
striped pants and continued out the door. So we all
headed down the spiral stairs; the place looked a lot nicer in daylight. Once
we got down the stairs and made a right, a small door way opened up to a large
dining room with a rectangular table occupying the middle of the room. There
were three windows on the left and the right side of the room, and the
back. The windows were as wide as two
doorways, and almost as tall as a basketball hoop. I was really surprised by how
big the room was, from the outside, you would’ve never noticed-well, at least
at two in the morning you couldn’t. I
hadn’t gotten a chance to check out the rest of the orphanage, but I had a
feeling the rest wouldn’t be as nice. We made our way into the dining room and
as we went to take our seats, it felt like the whole room was staring. I guess
we were a little late on the wake up call. There were only four seats left, in
the middle of the table, which forced me to seat next to annoying George and
zombie Vladus- I think he was still asleep. Cutter was at the edge of the four
seats, also forcing him against his will to sit next to a preppy looking girl
with blonde hair. She was pretty cute; maybe I’d talk to her after breakfast. The girl started to talk to Cutter,
probably introducing herself, telling her life story and such. I couldn’t hear
what Cutter replied to the girl, but I was pretty glad because it didn’t look
like he had any interest in her at all- figures. I glanced around the room to take a look at who I would be
living with for the rest of my life- well, at least until I was an adult or
miraculously got out of here. Across from me sat a blonde kid, he looked about
ten years old, with a bright red shirt too big for him on and a huge gap
between his front teeth. Next to him was another boy who looked about the same
age, had the same blonde hair, just no gap in his teeth. A couple seats down
there were three girls, all looking about my age or maybe a year younger, all
of their faces were blank and expressionless. Ok. Now I was really getting creped out. I sighed heavily as I observed the rest of the kids in the
room and wondered if hanging out with Vladus and Cutter. What was his real name
anyway? This whole time I hadn’t even bothered to find out. Not exactly the
best way to start out if there was ever a chance we would be friends, but I
highly doubted that. Food was
placed on the table and people began to eat. I stared down at the silver plate
in front of me; the only things that occupied it were scrambled eggs and
toast. Here we go. I lifted the shiny fork and decided to try out the eggs. “Ugh!” I thought as I spit them back onto my plate, “These
are so dry, they taste like they were cooked way too long!” “What’s the matter Dante?” George started, “You really
should eat your eggs, you know they are full of healthy proteins and-” “No George, I’m not,” I bluntly replied. George
shook his head muttering to himself and continued to eat his own food. I put the fork down and settled on the toast. I put the
bread up to my mouth but I couldn’t bring myself to try it. I had gotten enough
experience with the dry eggs. Just as I was setting it back on the plate, it
broke in two pieces. That’s just wonderful. Right when
I was about to dare to take a sip of the orange juice sitting in the glass
before me, I heard a snapping noise; almost like a branch breaking. I turned my
head around to the large window behind my head and glanced into the trees to
see what could’ve made the noise. I saw nothing. I looked around the table to
see if anyone noticed the noise, but everyone was engrossed in their meal. I came out of my thoughts just in
time to hear Cutter getting yelled at by Mrs. Wingrif for who knows what. I kind
of felt bad for the guy. When Mrs. Wingrif walked away, he slumped back into
his chair. I took my sympathy away deciding that he didn’t really deserve it. When
breakfast was over, we headed back up to our rooms to get changed. I wanted to
get ready fast so I could get a chance to talk to that girl in the dining room.
I put on my usual basketball shorts and t-shirt and my black jacket. I noticed
Cutter had his outfit on that I usually saw him in at school; black skinny
jeans and a gray tight t-shirt with a black splatter design on it. Vladus threw
on dark blue jeans and a plain gray t-shirt. I didn’t even dare to look at what
George was wearing. “I wonder if she’s still down there,” I thought. I quickly put my dirty clothes
away, stuffed my backpack under the bed, and combed my jet-black hair out. I was so caught up in trying to catch her
that I didn’t even notice the others looking at me like I was crazy. Oh well. I rushed out the door and down the
stairs and luckily, I didn’t have to go too far. Right as I turned the corner,
I bumped into the girl. “Oh; sorry!” She apologized quickly. “It’s ok. My name’s Dante, what
about you?” She had a huge smile on her face
and her eyes were beating with curiosity. “Hi! I’m Charlie Harpen. I’m
totally new here. So how did you end up here?” “…Well, my parents and my little
sister were visiting my aunt and they got in a car crash. That’s it.” Charlie almost looked sad for a
minute, but then smiled and stared talking again, “Oh. I’m sorry.” “Its ok,” I replied and gave her a
smile, “How did a pretty girl like you end up here?” She laughed lightly then got a
little somber. “My parents were at a casino and
were drinking a lot that night. They thought it was okay to drive, but they
were wrong. It was around 8 at night and they ran a red light and hit another
car.” I was about to say I was sorry for her when I noticed around
the corner, cutter was just staring at us. His face looked enraged, almost
ready to kill someone. “Hey wh- “ I started but stopped because before I could get
a word out, cutter ran up to Charlie and pushed her back against the wall, “How
could you!” he screamed in her face. I didn’t know what to do. He just pushed a girl against a freaking wall. “You think you can just come in here and be all happy go
lucky about your parents KILLING someone!”
He started again, “People who had families and friends, and people who
cared about them!” Cutter’s voice broke a little and I could’ve sworn I saw a
tear roll down his face. We were still in the hallway; some
kids stopped walking and stared at what was happening. Charlie looked shocked
and confused. I was also confused. How could’ve Charlie’s parents’ death upset
him like that? I could be so stupid sometimes.
Maybe, Charlie’s drunken parents were the ones who killed cutter’s family.
Crap. “Ok cutter, step off; it wasn’t
Charlie’s fault whatever happened." “Shut up
this isn’t your problem!” he turned to yell at me, “You don’t know what
happened, you have no idea how much
pain I have been through in the last weeks.” I was pretty calm until he said that. “You think, just because your
family got killed, it makes you and your feelings the most important in the
world? All of our families are dead. Gone. We all feel the same, even though
Charlie’s parents killed your family, there’s no reason for you to take it out
on her. So just get out of her face. ” “You’re saying that I think my
feelings are more important that everyone else’s?! My brother, my best friend is dead! And all you can do
is think about how selfish I am?” “Guys! Fighting won’t bring back
your families! Just stop, this is stupid!” Charlie finally spoke out. All of a sudden, Mrs.Wingrif
appeared at the bottom of the stairs, “Children, children! This is unacceptable
behavior! I think it’d be wise for you to get to your classes now.” I stared at Charlie, then cutter,
trying to decide what to do next. Cutter looked at me, as if he was trying to
figure me out, or trying to kill me with a look. We didn’t speak, just stared,
almost like at the hospital. Even if it was only for a seconds, it felt like
hours. Then, just like before, he turned away, and we all headed in opposite
directions. School went by fast and in such a
blur to me. I never got the greatest grades at Chadsey. I wondered how everyone
was doing. Here in the orphanage, it felt like we were in our on little world
and the outside world didn’t exist anymore. I hadn’t
seen or heard anything strange so far since breakfast, and I hoped I wouldn’t.
Now since classes were over, I headed back into the room because they required
that after school, we go straight up and work on homework. I didn’t get why
they made us do that, a whole hour locked in with those three. Reluctantly,
I trudged up the stairs to our door and stepped inside. Cutter lay sideways on
his bed, staring at the ceiling. George was humming away and working at the
dresser in by the window. Vladus hadn’t come from his classes yet, so it was
just us three for now. I went to get my CD player out of my backpack and sat
down carefully on the springy uncomfortable bed. In forty-five minutes, I had
finished math everything but history. I opened the crummy history book filled
with dust and almost falling apart and turned to the assigned page. My teacher
had assigned the first two chapters to read and a few questions; I thought
history was ok but reading-not so much. I sighed as I started to read with
music rocking in my head from my CD player, I couldn’t even hear the other two,
or if Vladus had come in. The title of chapter one was, St. Vincent’s Orphanage: A
History. OK. I usually did pretty well in history at Chadsey, but as boring as
this was, I didn’t think I’d stay awake for the whole chapter. I began to read, “Before it was renamed to St.Vincent’s
Orphanage in 2001, it was formally known a St. Vincent’s Asylum.” I stopped reading for a second. “This place…used to be an
asylum?” I thought. I turned back to read more. “It housed more than 100 residents and workers. Many of the
people who lived here had many problems in their life or in their minds. One
example of one man who stayed many years at the asylum, and was crazy in his
mind would be Leif Keller.” I stopped reading again. “Why did that name sound sort of
familiar? Maybe….” I pulled of my headphones, got off my bed, and stood up to
look at cutter. I glanced over to the other side of the room. Vladus was on
his bed, reading I think, and George was…well, doing who knows what. “Hey. What’s your name?” I demandingly asked. He didn’t even look in my direction, “Wouldn’t you like to
know.” “Come on, the worst thing I can do with your name is use it
instead of saying Cutter all the time,” I tried to get him to see that I wasn’t
going to ruin what was left of his life just by knowing his name. “Why does it matter?” he answered. I wish he would just tell me instead of trying to start a
fight, “Because I think this person has your last name.” “What?” he got down from the top bed and looked over my
shoulder. He read over the page in the book, then at my answer sheet. He took a
minute or two then looked up and said, “Never heard of him.” Cutter climbed back onto his bed and paid no more attention
to me. I couldn’t stand how he could be so obtrusive. I decided to let him have
a few minutes, and tried again. “So your last name isn’t Keller?” I questioned. He still
hadn’t told me his name. He paused and took a deep breath, like I was the one trying
to start a fight and he was the one who had to try not to break out in fists. “Well, maybe you like being
called a suicide freak who just wants to die. I just thought if your last name
is Keller, like the guy in this book, then maybe this place could get a little
more interesting.” I stated bluntly; this guy didn’t seem to know how to get a
hint. He jumped down again, and pushed me back onto my bed so I
was lying on my back. What was wrong with him? I was just trying to find out
his name. “Was that a threat?” he looked at me with challenging eyes
and a smile, just like he had the night before. “Will you guys just shut up already? I know you guys hate
each other, but seriously, go fight somewhere else.” Vladus lazily spoke up
from his bunk on the top. He just looked over long enough to tell us, and then
he went back to his homework. Cutter was going crazy. Maybe being in the orphanage got him
all messed up. I wasn’t going to kick his butt again. “Vladus is right. Just back off,” I said and paused to just
stare at him, figure out what his problem was. He challenged me again, “Are you afraid to fight?” Annoyingly I turned to completely face him, showing him I
wasn’t going to let a little shrimp like him take me down. “Nah, I’m just tired of getting into these little catfights
with you,” I answered. He rolled his eyes; we were both getting pissed. “Whatever.” Vladus and
George stared at us as we stood there facing each other. Then they went back to
whatever it was they were doing. He went back to his bed and me to mine. Right
as I was about to throw my headphones on, Cutter spoke up from above me, “My
name is Jayden… Keller.” My headphones froze halfway to my ears, then as I was about
to reply, I saw George’s mouth open and I threw my headphones on and tried to
finish history. Other than the guy Leif Keller, who went crazy in the crazy
house and then went missing and still is, nothing else was interesting. It was around 4 o’clock when Mrs.
Wingrif knocked in and told us we had some free time for the next couple of
hours. “Finally,” I thought, “that was the longest hour ever. Cutter, or Jayden, is seriously going to get
it next time.” I shook my head, threw myself back and lay on the
uncomfortable pillow again. “Oh yeah, I forgot!” I thought as I quickly shot back up. I was supposed to meet Charlie after homework. We were in
the same class, but sadly we were on opposite sides of the room. Somehow, she
got the invite to me without the teacher noticing. The classroom was pretty
ordinary, maybe a little smaller than a normal classroom, and it smelled weird.
It smelled like old and musty. The whole orphanage had that old musty smell, the
kind when you go to your grandma’s and sleep on their couch or something. I
stepped off the bed, slid my books into my backpack and stared to head out. I
saw Vladus was already gone when I got up to meet her, and George was
“recharging his brain power”. So when I
left, Cutter was really the only one there, and I didn’t think he’d care if I
left or not. I opened
the door, and jogged downstairs to find Charlie. I was supposed to meet her in
the living room, so I headed over. I turned into the room and saw her sitting on one of the
small red couches. “Hey Charlie,” I said. “Hey. I want to show you something,” she replied smiling, as
usual. I loved her smile. Even though her family was gone; she
still found something to smile about. “Sweet, what is it?” I questioned smiling back; her smile
was contagious. “What I want to show is not here, it’s some where else.” She
quickly replied. “Alright, where to?” I questioned again, still smiling. “Just follow me,” she said and grabbed my hand and pulled me
along. We went out of the living room, and turned the corner to go
out the back door. There were other kids hanging out, wasting the time away, so
none of them seemed to notice a little thing like Charlie, tugging a big thing
like me around. She pulled me to the back door, and we stepped outside. The
sun was still out with an afternoon shade. It shone through the willow trees
all throughout the yard. We walked past the trees and into a grass field. “Ok, just a little farther,” she turned to face me as she
assured me. I’m not sure why, but I stopped and just had to laugh. She
stopped too and looked confused. “What’s so funny?” she wondered. “I’m just so glad to have met you. You know, since I’ve
gotten here, I haven’t had exactly the best time. With my folks gone and all, I
thought I’d never be able to laugh and have fun like this again. But you…” I
paused for a second and grinned again, “You make me smile whenever I see you.” She stared up at me and I stared down at her. Then at the
exact same moment, we started cracking up. I’m not sure one of us understood
why, but it felt so good to finally relax and let go with someone-I hadn’t been
able to that in a while. “Aw. Thanks! Dante, you’re the sweetest person I’ve met
here,” she said smiling her beautiful smile still holding my hand, and lightly
squeezed it, “I’m really glad I met you too.” I stared into her sparkling, turquoise eyes and grinned. “Let’s go before we
have to go back to our rooms,” she returned my smile. She took my hand again and started pulling me towards a
bunch of willow trees. I stopped her again. “You don’t have to hold on, I’m not going to run away,” I
jokingly said. “That’s a good point,” she sad, then smiled playfully, “But
I don’t know that and you are a giant.” “Giant?” “Dante,” she paused and smiled, “You’re freaking tall.” “Fine fine. Where are we going anyway?” “You’ll see.” So we ran a little farther in the middle of the bunch of
willow trees to a dark building with a cross on the top. “There’s a church here?” I asked her. Then I thought how did
she know about this place? We both got to the orphanage at the same time. “Yeah.” “Where’s the thing you wanted to show me?” ‘It’s inside.” She led me to two large brown doors with a carving of Jesus
and his arms open, as if welcoming us into the church. My family wasn’t too religious. There was a church we went
to around the corner from our house. It was a small congregation and we were
some of the few members there. My mom tried to get us to go every Saturday, but
that didn’t work too well. So we just went when we could, and my mom trying to
get us there as much as possible. I enjoyed it, believe me I did, it’s just I
didn’t make enough time for it. “Dante?” Charlie asked. I got out of my remembrance in time to say, “Yeah. Let’s go
in.” We easily pushed the doors and with a loud creak, they
opened. “Whoa,” I whispered. I didn’t know why I whispered when it
was just the two of us and no one else was here. It felt like I had to though
or some old guy would come out of nowhere and tell me to be quiet. It was a church, but it felt like a castle almost. It was
huge and there were stained glass windows lined up on both sides of the room.
Each window displayed a story from the bible and each window with the sun
shining through was an array of colors. “Isn’t it amazing? Well besides the dust.” she questioned,
“As dreary as the orphanage is, you would never think that there was a place
like this in the middle of it all.” “Yeah…” I replied not paying full attention. This church was so big! Rows of large wooden benches
followed up to a small stage with only two steps. There was a table with a red
cloth in front of the alter with an old bible on top of it. Behind the alter
was an old, rusted organ with a few broken pipes. And above that, there was a
faded inscription on the wall that said, “Saint Vincent’s Church- God accepts
all people.” I guess by “all people” they meant, even though they were
crazy, God would still accept them. I wonder if the last time they used this
church was before the asylum was renamed as an orphanage. “Ok. Follow me,” Charlie finally spoke up after minutes of
us analyzing the church. She walked past the rows of pews up to the alter. “Hey Charlie, are you sure that we’re allowed to be here?” I
asked. I was thinking about how this orphanage used to be an insane house and
why was the church hidden by a bunch of willow trees? “I don’t know.” She said as she beckoned me in front of the
alter. She didn’t look too confident in her answer. I wonder if Charlie knew about how it used to be an asylum. “Charlie,” I said. “Yeah,” she replied. “You know that this orphanage used to an asylum, right?” I
carefully questioned. “…It was?” she raised her eyebrows and her mouth fell open. “Yeah, that’s why the sign in the front is crossed off and
written over.” I explained, “And I think they used this church before it was an
orphanage.” “Well….” she got serious, “Just c’mon and see what I found.”
I jogged over to where Charlie was standing behind the
alter. She lifted a latch to reveal cement stairs leading into complete
darkness. “What…what is this?” I shockingly asked. She grabbed my hand again and starting pulling me down the
stairs. I stopped and started, “Charlie where the he-“ “Dante, it’s dark so be careful. I’m not sure what this
place is and that’s why I wanted to show you,” she said. And so we tugged down the stairs and into the darkness. “This is crazy,” I thought, “Where could this go?” We got down the stairs onto a hard, cold floor. This place
smelled like crap. It was like rotten eggs mixed with sweaty gym socks and...What
was that other smell mixed in? It smelled mostly like…blood. It was so dark; I
could barely see Charlie right in front of me. Not looking back, Charlie let go of my hand and whispered
almost to herself, “I left the light on…why…” She carefully walked a few feet
in front of me. It felt like we were on a ramp now. Kind of like the kind you
walk on to get onto a boat or something. CRASH! I tried to find her hand to help her up. Once I had found
it, it was wet. “Are you bleeding?” I questioned, “What happened?” “I’m fine…” she said, “I just broke that old lamp.” “So now there’s no light down here? How are we supposed to
get out?” She didn’t answer right away, and I tried to read the
expression on her face, but it was too dark. “No. There’s another light in the room down the tunnel. But
it’s really small, so it’ll be hard to see.” “Ok. Let’s find it then.” She nodded her head; at least I think she did. We started again, but this time I was leading; even though I
had no idea where I was going. We cautiously trudged further down the tunnel in
complete darkness. I lead us slowly forward because Charlie’s hands still had
glass in them so I didn’t want her to bump into anything again. “Charlie, what were you saying before you broke the lamp?” She paused again. “When I left here to find you, I left it
on. But…when we got here it was off.” “That’s weird. Maybe it just burned out.” I suggested. “I don’t know,” she whispered to herself. So in silence again, we kept going through the tunnel to
find the room she was talking about. I tried to hold my breath but the smell
was really strong. What creped me out was that it smelled so strongly of blood.
As I led her, I used one hand to feel the wall, and the other to hold hers. The
wall of the tunnel was ice cold and felt like sand paper. I could feel my hand
start to bleed from being scratched by the roughness of the wall, but still I
kept going. After what felt like forever in dark and silence, my left hand on
the wall fell onto a breeze of cold air and dropped to my side. I stopped and tried to peer into the dark. “Dante,” Charlie finally spoke up, “This is the room. The
string to turn on the light is in the middle.” I let go of her hand, “Ok. Wait right here just in case I
can’t find it.” Slowly, I walked forward, feeling for some kind of string or
chain in front of me. SMACK! “Ow,” I said. I reached right in front of my face, and immediately found a
slimy chain and tugged on it. She was right. The light was super dim, it wasn’t much help,
but at least now we could see what was around us. And I really wanted to see
what was up with this place. I heard a yell behind me. I quickly turned around to see
cutter standing behind Charlie. He looked like a pathetic version of a horror
movie gone wrong. “What…cutter what are you doing down here? Did you follow
us?” I questioned. Charlie was still catching her breath from cutter running
into her and scaring the heck out of her.
Cutter had bloody cuts all over his hands and his nose was bleeding. “No…no I would never
do that. I was frolicking in the meadow with the butterflies when I just happen
to come across this tunnel in the ground, accidentally bumping into a wall and
giving myself a bloody nose, and then falling on a lamp that someone seems to have broken and cutting
my hands,” he sarcastically replied. Charlie looked at him like he was insane and walked over to
my side. “Sorry… I knocked over the lamp...” she slowly apologized. “Really?” he sneered at her. “So, now what?” I stepped in. “Dante….and..?”
Charlie looked over at cutter, motioning him to tell her his name. Cutter didn’t reply; instead, he started to wander over to
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