Blue Angel Rhapsody (A Magnetic Poem)

This poem was composed using the "Love Kit" from Magnetic Poetry.

emotioned friend

I think that innocent girl

can have light

chocolate laughs

drink another dream

remember wing woman's wish

every evening she dances

and listens to blue angel rhapsody

where a universe river soars

she plays sacred peace

and faith voice

sister bloom

receives

the sweet strong

spirit of morning

on goddess night

Author's Note

This poem has nothing to do with Arzel Joy (a.k.a. "Blue") - although that would be cool!

Reviews

I so love the mysterious alliteration used in this beautiful piece, no need to quote the lines for a person knows what I mean by saying that.... (I hope)... know you do.

So much great English word twists, here. If it has to do with our sweet Arzel joy (Bleu) or not, the words I think speak for themselves... and the reader should just interpret them as they where meant to be, and to me they were perfectly mysterious this time... that's the beauty of poetry...

There is a glimpse of love, of reaching out to the one you want to reach out to, and there is comfort... The word "sister" makes it all...

Well done once again Eric.

- Elisa