Deepest

Two lovers wanting to communicate emotionally.

a mutual shower

seemingly sheds all privacy...

our bodies shrouded in steam,

we share perspiration, in this 

alizarin crimson light.

I mesmerize my lover

with a rapturous kiss;

she kneads my chest

with sweet coconut oil,

stroking the muscles

in intimate gestures.

and ever so gently, I seem to

find her deepest affections

that she keeps hidden

even from herself.

my hands explore the

carmine gateway to

pleasures yet untouched,

releasing an explosive burst

of euphoria,

that moves through us both.

and yet

still, there is 

something inside

beyond her body

I cannot 

reach...

Reviews

[s y e]

A very sexy, sensual piece... What more can I say? Aha.

Hot and steamy for sure..... windows are open for me.

[Tina Louise UK]

You are very good at these Eric, a sensual, seductive piece :) x

[Eric Pudalov]

Thank you Tia! I'm finally in touch with my inner lover. ;-)

[Ruth]

Ohh, nice!! A woman has many doors lol This is sensual but not too much, alluring, actually, wonderfully done x

[Madalyn Beck]

You have touched me without even touching me. This is a fantastic and steamy write! I was getting a bit hot and bothered by this! Great job! xo :)

[Eric Pudalov]

Ooh, thank you Madalyn! And to think...I used to have trouble with the ladies - I should have read them this poetry! ;-)

[Madalyn Beck]

After reading this, I can't imagine how you would have had trouble with the ladies!! ;)

[Eric Pudalov]

LOLOL!!! Well, I suppose I hadn't discovered my passion yet at the time.

[Blue]

Eric. Wow. I'm red all over my cheeks now! I've read lots of erotica RRs tonight. I wonder what's with you, people? Haha.

I love the last line. It's a surprise that made me sigh.

[Eric Pudalov]

Thank you Arzel!! It's funny, because this is a side of myself I haven't explored much in writing yet. I'm glad you loved the last line, too...I really feel this poem is not only about sex, but about a couple that has trouble communicating, in spite of how intimate they are.

[Blue]

And your message is clearly understood, Sir. :) I'm in the midst of writing an erotica now. Haha.

[Eric Pudalov]

Ooh, I can't wait to read it! Perhaps you'll provide me with more inspiration!! Rawr...

[Blue]

Chuckling here! ;) I just typed it here on MS Word and I still can't put them together.

[Lover Of Words]

You so made me sigh when i read this... You have such a passionate side... Obviously cause you made me melt

[Eric Pudalov]

Aww, thank you Kelsey! I think that passionate side had been waiting to come out for a long time, and I finally feel comfortable expressing it here. I'm glad I made you melt! :-)

[Lover Of Words]

You did very much ;)