Shadow Poet

A senryu dedicated to my friend and fellow poet, Robbie.

angelic stranger

writes her reveries in ink

passion on parchment

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

awwwww So LOVELY!!

Friedalicious is right!...I'm over the moon, Eric!

Thank you, I love it!

Not only did you write it with syllabic precision, you also gave it life!...
Forming an imagery with very little room to elaborate is NOT an easy task...

You have penned this with a poetic heart...I find it mystical and charming...

Gorgeous Senryu!~xoxo~:)

Into my favorites!

[Eric Pudalov]

Thank you so much, Robbie!! I'm glad you like it. I realize I haven't known you that long, but I love your writing, and honestly, you have inspired me to write more relationship-based poetry, something that I've struggled with. That's why I joined the site, to find inspiration and to meet other likeminded poets.

[Blue]

Very very very nice, Eric. You gave justice to Robbie's talent! I like her works, too, you know.

[Eric Pudalov]

Oh, that's awesome! Yes, I can see why she's so popular. I just read some of your haikus (or haiku attempts, as you put it). I'll comment when I read them a 2nd time. I enjoyed them, however!

[Blue]

I'm not confident about them that's why I didn't send RR. But I appreciate random visits to my page. :) Thank you again.

[Lydia Shutter]

What a wonderful tribute to Robbie....she surely does write passionate poetry! Good senyru. Lydi**

[Shirlena]

I love it so don't stop. I'm kidding it is perfect it's just that I'm greedy and I always want more...I'm talking about poetry-smile. I could have kept going but have to respect that you've said enough.

[Eric Pudalov]

LOL! Well, in this case, I wanted to write a senryu, which isn't necessarily 17 syllables long, but usually just three lines. Perhaps I'll write another "romantic" poem that will be a little longer.

[Linda alexander]

Great poem, great picture, poems of universe, and the poet who does those poems is above human admiration, glad you could bring a part of it to readers, enjoyed

[Eric Pudalov]

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and what a wonderful compliment; I'm humbled as well!

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome.take care

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautiful little read for a beautiful lady :) x

[Eric Pudalov]

Thank you! :-)

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful tribute...Thank you for sharing...:).........

[Eric Pudalov]

You're very welcome!

[Sami Khalil]

You are very welcome too...:)...................

[Frieda P]

OH I love this Senryu...perfection!

[Eric Pudalov]

Thank you!! May I ask...what is the difference between a Senryu and a haiku??

[Frieda P]

I'm no expert, but I think a Haiku usually pertains to nature....you're welcome, this is a great, really conveys an emotion, Robbie will be over the moon!

[Eric Pudalov]

LOL, I hope so! :-)

[Frieda P]

She will, she's going to go crazy when she reads it...if she can get past your clown nose without being hysterical haha ;-)

[Eric Pudalov]

It's my favorite picture of me.

[Eric Pudalov]

Oh, and by the way, I changed the "genre" to say "senryu." I wasn't aware that they had that as a choice until now!

[Frieda P]

Good idea, there are people that like a short, quick read and it'll come up in search.

[Eric Pudalov]

Thank you, that's a great idea!! I actually looked it up, and there are many different variations of the 5-7-5 poem structure. I should try out some of the others.