No One But Us

A Poem.

NO one but us

i want to stand and stare

for all that is which remains

| our eyes ~~ 

Accepting the tears 

of your jewels of love

from your eyes

No matter, i will touch

your tender wall 

of love and life ~~

It's in your eyes

all within your eyes

so i stand and stare

All within the life

of your experience

(in your eyes) 

Life | i gave sometime

and sometimes /easy/

but nothing connects

to the place 

where you are

So soon without noise

i feel your fingers

Like heat | i'm complete

in your heart | i want 

to touch your face

In all my incomplete dreams

I want to be a part of you

so let me dream ~ in your eyes

Author's Note

Poetry is a tear drop within the cup of infinity

Reviews

[Amy R]

Reminds me of beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.
You know you can read out someone very quick through their eyes, even if its just one look/glance...

I liked how you portrayed a sense of vulnerability and longing for emotional connection here..

"In all my incomplete dreams
I want to be a part of you
so let me dream ~ in your eyes" My fav stanza, I love everything about this.,

The language used in the poem is very emotive and expressive, with words like "jewels of love," "tender wall of love," and "incomplete dreams" evoking strong feelings... this piece also has a nice rhythmic flow.

Very lovely poem.
-Amy

[E.P. Robles]

Your feedback is so perceptive. Thank you! :)

[Amy R]

You're welcome. I enjoyed reading it...

[E.P. Robles]

Thank you so much.

[FlaLover]

very profound!
one would be lucky to feel even a fraction of this emotion