Chewing Gum

a warning

To drive adn talk

Is to chew gum and walk-

I never do both at once.

 

For to drive and talk

Is to swerve unto the walk-

Then run into the gum chewer

 

And die.

Reviews

[Imperfection]

I'll keep that in mind
:-)

[Barry S. Maltese]

I like the message and the twist you use to deliver it. Nice touch.

[FreeSoulLoveDance]

LOL!!!! This was really cute, i'll defianlty remeber that when I am driving. :)

[Sara Henry Heistand]

Oh. My. Gawd.

Normally, poetry would not razz me to such a Valley Girl state, but, Gory! You...amaze me. Such a contrast, such a twisted sing-song. This is so simple, yet so complex... The contrast. Oh goodness, that contrast... Is that...? Is that euphoria, I feel?

To the ear, the natural bubbliness is all very cutesy and could very well serve as a jumping rope rhyme in some backwash school yard. Though the mind is beginning to understand the context, the head doesn't fully implode until your...very...last...line.

Every think of making your own greeting cards?