Question

I don't know how to give love

Without giving too

Myself, so can you help me?

Reviews

[Sara Henry Heistand]

The second line and the beginning of the third line are a little confusing... I'm not exactly sure as to how this is supposed to be read. I understand that's this is supposed to be a haiku (though since it isn't about nature, this is actually a "senryu"), but the second line just sounds awkward without that extra syllable of "it" - if that's what it's supposed to be?

[Sara Henry Heistand]

Y'know what?
I'm an idiot.
I get it, I got it.
Goooooood.

[Tenten]

very introspective, i believe love is just another of giving to yourself so its a wonderful haiku to my eyes.