A World Stacked Against Love

A World Stacked Against Love

A Poem by Ryan Luse

 

A World Stacked Against Love
       a ryan luse jam
 
In a world stacked against love
Maybe it's all just random gibberish
The weather changes just when you put on the gloves
Spend your time wondering, is there really light above
Like six billion, lost and curious fish.
 
In a world stacked against love
You're favored to be knocked down again
Everytime you get up you hang your head a little lower
When your voice once sang it now shakes and is slower
Like revisiting your dreams with just a pen.
 
But some things still take my breath away
A spontaneous sunrise and how the stars array
When I'm lost in your eyes, the hope lost finds it sail
In this world stacked against love, we just may prevail.
 
In a world stacked against love
Your child-like view begins to fade
Where all the drinks and pills is just a temporary illusion
Your chance to believe again ends in circular confusion
Like the grass after a meaningless parade
 
In a world stacked against love
The automatic pilot trumps the heart
When the golden rule rarely sets compassion in motion
When the tears of the oppressed could fill an entire ocean
Like a merry-go-round broken from the start
 
But some things still move me to the core
A couple growing old, starring out at the shore
For all my imperfections, the way you can sweetly see me through
In this world stacked against love, maybe someday we'll come true.

© 2008 Ryan Luse


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Wow, this is awesome!
My favorite stanza:
"But some things still move me to the coreA couple growing old, starring out at the shoreFor all my imperfections, the way you can sweetly see me throughIn this world stacked against love, maybe someday we'll come true."

Great write, my friend!

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Ryan Luse
Ryan Luse

Twin Cities, MN



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