Tears I shed for you

Im somewhere in between what is real,just a dream (8)

For all the days I stood by the phone
For all the hopes built so high
For all the dreams I had of you
For all the love that I showed you
For all the tears I shed for you
For the moments my heart died without you
For the days spent thinking of you
For everything done remembering you
For the time spent analyzing your moves
For all the tears I shed for you
And after all we've been through
Im left hanging on this thread
And after all that happened between us
You still dared to leave
And after all the times we had
Im now madly in love
Leaving me here with tears shed for you
Bleeding what my heart cant take any longer
Bleeding out my pain and love
Wishing the blood would take with it
My misery,
My love,
My life.

Author's Note

Im just lost.You know the feeling when you arent so sure about the status of anything you're going through in life?Yeah,thats how it always is for me.

Reviews

[Alexis]

I understand what you're saying here. I love every single line - they all fit nicely together, there was a lot of emotion, and I can tell you really put your heart and mind into it; it's all you and very personal. Personal poems can usually be some of the best ones. They sometimes have really good advice from personal experience, they sometimes have good emotion from personal experience, they sometimes have really deep thoughts from personal experience... They just tend to be great from what I've seen. This poem of yours was no exception - it was awesome! Although, I'm sorry to hear you're having a difficult time. I hope things start to get better soon! Great poem. God bless you!