A short bit 1

I walk down the vacant alley not yet named, but will be soon I hear. 

How does it occur to the townsmen to create a name for a useless gravel path? 

No one will ever live on this street.

 

No mail will be sent here. 

No people will mingle here. 

A sad thought for something so simple and irrelevant. 

Reviews

[BeanHead:)]

that was good.you used emphasis on the bit about the street and mail and people. also you added something personal to it by writing " a sad thought". maybe use italics when your writing your thoughts down. just so people/ readers know that its a thought.