Bitter after taste of Christmas

Bitter after taste of Christmas

A Poem by Entrelesnuages

A

sparkly

shimmer

A glow

Then A glimmer

My wish is to be thinner

Funny how holiday cheer

Only makes us reach for more beer

When faced with bright lights, gifts

Our downward spiral becomes so swift

The cheeriness of how we ought to be

The intimidating notion of caring for a tree

Seeing our family brings out all our ghosts

It’s a forced reunion with those we hate most

The same holidays supposed to bring out our best

Only make us acknowledge that we are such a mess

The presents not thoughtful the turkey always too small

Make a Merry

Christmas

To one

And to all

© 2011 Entrelesnuages


Author's Note

Entrelesnuages
This was a very bad attempt to make this look like a Christmas tree. Hmm upon reflexion it kind of looks like a bell. Any feedback appreciated.

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realizing your work is very creative ..love the read ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome attempt at a tree. That was extremely true. Love it! Phenomenal

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah i like this so much, loved the set up. Awesome write and so creative

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on December 10, 2011
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Entrelesnuages
Entrelesnuages

San Francisco, CA



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I was born in NYC but I live in San Francisco. I live to read and write a little bit of everything. My favorite book would have to be Cloud Atlas by David Mitchell. I believe the secret of happines.. more..

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