my mind plays tricks on me

my mind plays tricks on me

A Poem by Charlene

awake or asleep
my mind plays tricks on me
is there more to me i don't know?
or is it that i see more than i can?
am i different from everyone else?
or is  my mind playing tricks on me?

© 2012 Charlene


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Excellent. I love this. oh oh oh...so many alarms ringing in my head on such a short write. thought all of this before but never been able to put it into any kind of words, never mind something so succint. So, in summation, i like this a lot.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short, but to the point

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hi Charlene! It's Olivia. Don't you love this website?

Anyway, this was really whimsical but dark at the same time. Kind of reminded me of the Mad Hatter, full on Johnny-Depp-orange-eyebrow style. Love! xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


love this, wonderful and playful.
Awesome write!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Charlene
Charlene

Boston, MA



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