Do You Feel It?

I got inspiration from an amazing song one night and just started writing. Haven't done that in a long time, so it was nice (:

He asks her, "Where is the person you miss the most?"

She says, "Heaven," 

And bows her head.

"Heaven?" he says, as he sits down beside her.

He looks at her

For a moment,

And smiles.

"What are you looking at?" she asks

Eyes wide.

Fingers intertwining, 

Like the thoughts in her mind.

"I'm looking for you," he says, staring deep into her eyes.

He puts his hand over her heart,

As the beats restart.

She says she can't be found, like his touch on her skin,

Her face turned serious,

As she stands up and askes him,

"Where is the person you miss the most?"

He says, "In a world I cannot fathom.

An illusion of an abode

That I don't belong in."

Pacing back and forth she stares at her feet,

Watching her body travel, 

But never really reach.

She stops. Slowly raises her head.

"I feel it,"

Tears trickling down her face, she said.

Dropping to her knees, hand grasping at her chest.

She cant breath,

She cant breath,

Just take it away, that aching need.

A ringing in her mind, sounding deep in her soul,

Where is the person you miss the most?

"Right here," she gasps,

And holds her body close.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think (:

Reviews

[Oren Giovanni]

Its pretty astounding, i can see every picture clearly in my mind :)