Aftermath

Aftermath

A Story by Enthusiast
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Flash fiction. 100 words.

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She gapes at the smoldering heap of rubble, the acrid smoke making her gag nearly as much as her desolation. Tears wash rivulets down her blackened face.

"What are we going to do?" she falters, her shaking hand seeking his.

"We are going to start over," he says. "We've done it before."

"I didn't think it would end like this. Not again."

He gently takes her in his arms, tugging at the hair at the nape of her neck.

"We're going to be ok," he says. "But next time we have a fight, please don't burn down the house again."

© 2009 Enthusiast


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oh he is so generous, your character. I love generous people. This was worth to win the Ultra-short Contest. Loved it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Congratulations on winning the Ultra-short Contest!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 6, 2009

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