Why!!!

Why!!!

A Poem by jaimemamere
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Author's Comments: "This was pretty hard to write, as it is the first poem I have written about our loss, emergency DNC in the third trimester

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To my son I will never see

WHY!!!!!
By WTC
2005

Through the loss of an unborn son
An unknown journey had just begun
The place to where I did not know
My only comfort, together we did go

 My pain and sorrow could never compare
The physical torment we did not share

The doctor’s scalpel, she alone did bear
 

Is there a reason you had to take
What we together, our love did make
I still believe, but must confess
Many doubts, still cross my chest

But when I look, up to the sky
I still don't know the reason why
But in the end God's will be done
A lesson learned from an unborn son

© 2012 jaimemamere


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awwww so touching and so sad. With what you have written and the way you wrote it, you make the reader feel all of the emotions written in the words. The pain, grief, and sadness trying to reach out for comfort and understanding! absolutly an amazing poem! hope to read more like this one!!

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very touching.

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Aw so sad, it was a very nice poem, Great Poem!! I felt your pain through the poem, you did an amazing job!!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awwww so touching and so sad. With what you have written and the way you wrote it, you make the reader feel all of the emotions written in the words. The pain, grief, and sadness trying to reach out for comfort and understanding! absolutly an amazing poem! hope to read more like this one!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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hmm
Deeply powerful and heart tugging,
Emotional read. Nicely done!

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