<< let me think about it) (not done yet)

Searching deep within the cavity

making way to the decrepit soul

Blood slowly trying to bypass all the

broken and sewn, and sewn again wounds

visible as the brightest star in the universe.

Time passing slowly

patience hanging on by a thread

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Author's Note

not finished yet come back later

Reviews

[Jibey]

Good start... Effective image of the blood... with its healing, cleansing power..