Avoidance

Putting myself at a distance

hiding behind a shadow

so no one can see

the wreck I have come to be

 

Forcing on a smile

to avoid everybody's

sanity

Twists and turns

through out my body

throwing loop holes

trying to avoid crashing

into reality.

 

Reviews

[Jibey]

An aching, searing piece

[Edgar A Stonehill]

"hiding behind a shadow" is an excellent line. You have done an excellent job portraying how some people hide themselves in plain sight, and the emotional cost of doing so.

Great Job.