For fallen have I ever fell

Heart break: For I have fallen in love with someone whom I should have not fallen for, forever I am fallen

For fallen have I ever fell,
For I fell so hard,
So hard I've fallen to the floor,
The floor covered with tears
and puddles of blood
as a result from the fall
the fall that shattered the glass heart
the glass heart that is no more
no more but scattered shards of glass
For fallen have I ever fell
there shall be no more to fall for
for all that could fall has fallen

Reviews

[Edgar A Stonehill]

Your word selection made this entertaining to read even though the subject is grim.

For what it is worth (and it may be worthless) I think "as a result from the fall" is the weakest line and it might sound better as "rendered from the fall"

Overall, this is great.

[Jibey]

The alliterative repetitions and conjuring of the language makes for a kind of amusing but also touching write which I enjoyed

[Leaner Pastures]

"For fallen have I ever fell" has great movement to it, and not just because of the double verbs. There is a subtle contrast between fallen and fell that you have drawn out with your shattered heart and puddles of blood. I like it.