MOTH DRAWN TO A FLAME!

Fluttering wings echo the fluttering of my heart,
this horrid distance keeping us apart.
Theres a fire in me burning bright,
And i feel Like im drawn to your light.

Its like im a moth that wants a safe place to land,
Always going through things that were unplanned.
Always getting caught in a fire ablaze,
My romantic fantasy craze....

So if im a moth drawn to your flame,
Should i be so full of self blame?
Will i get burnt again just like before?
Of this i can't really be sure.

I dont wanna fly to fast i may scare you away,
Dont wanna bug you to much from day to day.
I don't want to get ahead of myself, im holding back,
Trying to take the slow and steady track.

A blazing orange flame of light,
Attacts me once its in my sight.
A simple moth drawn to a flame,
Just hope things dont end the same.

Reviews

[Daniel Valentine Rivera]

The moth analogy is so creative! It compliments the theme of the poem so gracefully. How you feel lost and directionless, unsure of where to go you end up going to the love interest. But then the interest might not be all that interested in you, and that's when the golden flames burn the soul. Fear of being annoying, fear of being out of place, but hope that end will still see light. Then the rhyme scheme is just on point. This whole poem gave me "moths" in my stomach. Amazing job Cimmy. Spectacular poem.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank u so much for your lovley review :)