ROLLERBLADING WITH YOU!

Ill put those skates on for the first time,
Ill sit down and tie my laces tight,
To begin with i wont feel so sublime,
See its gotta feel wrong before it feels right.

Ill be doubting myself and ill be scared,
Ill feel a very long way from prepaired.
So you'll hold my hand and guide me though,
And suddenly it won't have to be scary because its new.

Ill stumble a couple of times, ill fall,
But iv gotta get back up, be in it for the long hall.
Ill hear the sound of my heart pounding in my chest,
Change is scary, but can turn exciting, bad turning to best.

So our roller bladding experience could be compaired,
To this new relationship we will now have shared.

Im overthinking alot and im always having doubts, though all the twists turns and different routes.
I have high hopes that we will learn together,
And fix eachother up if we are to teather.
I love you to the moon and back,
And ill travel with you down this track..

Reviews

[barleygirl]

To use being new at rollerblading as an analogy for getting to know someone romantically -- fresh idea! I really did know a guy (decades ago) who taught me to roller skate (blades hadn't been invented yet) as a romantic overture. There's nothing quite as fun as this exact scenario you describe! The combination of being afraid to fail & being excited about something new -- this makes your poem tingle! "I love you to the moon & back" is cliche, but I love that saying, so I'll overlook it! *wink! wink!* fondly, Margie

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks so much for another sweet review. I can be a little cheesy lol

[Chris Shaw]

I like the analogy you have used here cimmie. An enjoyable read. Well penned.

Chris

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[HadesRising]

Reminds me of the old rollerdisco were I used to live, nice little piece. Well Done.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks :) :)