MY HEART!

MY HEART

Been abused

Feels used

I'm not amused

Wouldn't want anyone to be in my shoes.

Lost what I doubt can be regained

Broken peaces are all that have remained

Every day it feels so strained

I'm so pained.

If I couldn't feel

If this wasn't real

If my heart was made of steal

If only I could heal.

If I wasn't as weak as a feather,

If only I didn't teather,

Maybe I could make it through the stormy weather.

My heart can no longer bear,

What I deam to be unfair,

Unwarm with the chill of the air,

Left by the people that were not there,

The ones that left without a care.

Fragile, broken, weak, and defeated,

Wanting, waiting to be completed,

Needing to be reheated,

And not feel so cheated.

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I like this and i don't mean i like the content... no but, but i do just not the fact that you feel or felt those things oh you get my point:) your sincerity bleeds thru the lines sublime and a grace of and in empathy come to this witness to your poem I love rhythm and rhyme in poetry and you flowed lovely with a very true voice in here will have to read more of you:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks im glad you liked it so much :)

[barleygirl]

Being a writer who enjoys doing rhyme & rhythm myself, the things I like about yours -- your rhyming sequences go on just the right amount before switching to a different rhyme sound & your transitions sound very natural -- and you have natural rhythm, even tho your lines are not uniform or structured, there's a naturally balanced way that your writing happens. I also love your message & the tone of being struck but not busted! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Aww this review means alot thank u. I really appreciate that

[HadesRising]

how beautifully written!!!!! ... love this !!!!!

Very good style of writing you have. Well Done.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

:) :) thank u