EMOTIONALLY BROKEN!

Where do I start when explaining how I feel,

I'm broken and don't know how to heal.

One thing I know is my love for you is beyond explanation,

But due to not being happy iv given into temptation.

I don't think you will ever understand,

Its not enough to take my hand.

because you may be there, and I know you care,

but emotionally I'm off somewhere....

My head is in the clouds, I am no longer in control,

Thinking with my emotions, (no brain,) just heart and soul.

From you I'm feeling, depressed, sad and disconnected,

you'll never understand me emotionally, and I'm greatly affected.

My friends and family are amazing, and to them I am bound,

With them just for awhile  happiness can be found.

You try, and you can be amazing, you are a good guy,

but I'm hardly ever happy, and usually on an emotional high.

Then there's this guy that does your job, and for a minute I'm happy,

But I'm scared, and I love you, I'm also feeling guilty, and crappy.

So I don't know if when I'm back with you, and in your embrace,

if we should go on, because I'm tired of running this race.

I'm on an emotional roller coaster, and its you,

do I jump off or stay on? I don't have a clue.

Because I feel like this coaster is just speeding down a broken track,

and I don't know how to get the ups back.

Reviews

[Jibey]

If in doubt, get out - that's my advice!

I enjoyed reading through this jingly piece, with its self-searching and plea for help in the uncertainties of the relationship in question. He needs to understand your need of emotional stroking. It wont last without it.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you. :) great advice wish it where that easy to get out

[Franky]

This sounds the the Avril Lavigne song "What the Hell". Same situation without the guilt.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

U think? That's an interesting concept. Thank you for the review

[Franky]

That song is a farce i realize. Real life is another story.

[rowan.taylorrr]

i feel this on so many levels. going through this girl it sucks and i hate it, this piece is marvelous. thank you for this

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I'm sorry ur going through something similar. Thanks for the review

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Powerful, from beginning to end. Enjoyed your way of explaining things, as always.

“Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.” Lao Tzu.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks so much :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Beautifully written. You have expressed your feelings really well and creatively used different metaphors to provide a broader meaning.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for the review

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome.