ONE WITH THE RAIN!

The rain starts off slow as it silently weaps,
Then as the night goes on a little rain turns into heaps.
Just like the rain my emotions are out of control,
And those many tears stream down my face instead of roll.

Noone fully understands the rain, it is misunderstood,
Even the weather man can't predict the rain noone ever could.
Just like the rain emmotional people can be hard to understand,
People say we are weak, or its attention that we demand.

We dont choose to feel this way, and usually depression takes a part,
But mainly we emotional souls just have such a big heart.
We feel things more intensely then others because we care so much,
When we see things that are heartbreaking or sad, its our souls that are touched.

Somtimes we understand and are sympathetic to things other people dont get,
We are definitely hard to deal with, but we can be one of the best people uv ever met.

So when talking to us watch what you say, be considerate and kind,
Because we can't just stop and leave our emotions behind.
You have no idea how much of a burden they can be,
If only you where us, u would know, you would see.

Just like the rain misunderstood and out of control,
This is what it feels like to be an emotional soul.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The rain and our emotions. Both can be a wild storm.
"Just like the rain misunderstood and out of control,
This is what it feels like to be an emotional soul."
The above lines are true. Our emotions can make us feel wild and uncontrolled. Thank you dear poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Glad you agree :)
Thank you for the review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Inject Positivity]

I can't believe I'm seeing my own thoughts written here... This is just too relatable to me... What a superb way you have explained and presented the message... I really know the deepest meaning of this poem... We are mostly misunderstood because of our strong emotions... Such a kind and very well thought out write Cimmy... Very well done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I'm glad you can relate, and I'm really glad you understood this so much, and that you liked it so much :)
Thank you for your review :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Only sensitive can understand... the intensity of rain... to some it brings delight, to some lost memories....
well, all that I can say is this poem is a mixture of emotions both of happy moments and sad... regrets may be...
partly smiling and partly sobbing...
Rain is something beautiful.. like the sky sobs sometimes...through clouds as we sob sometimes through eyes...
very beautifully written...
I liked it...
Anindita : )

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you very much for your review once again

[D]

And I thought I'm just an attention maniac... lol.
of course not.

you write amazingly well. :) It's actually refreshing.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Well thank you very much. Glad you like my writing so much :)

[D]

You're welcome :)

[Satan]

You're so honest and real cimmy. It's what makes you so delightfully beautiful, this is the poetry I always want to read. I wish I could be more like you, sweet and loving, not so brutal. I'm just so upset and dissapointed by the things I see, it makes me so angry. 1000/100.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This review is one of the best i have recieved in ages. I really love ur feedback. Thank u sooooo much.
U are an amazing writer im sure if u just let go and write from the heart u could write anyway u want to.