ONE WITH THE RAIN!

ONE WITH THE RAIN!

A Poem by cimmy wuv xxxooo

The rain starts off slow as it silently weaps,
Then as the night goes on a little rain turns into heaps.
Just like the rain my emotions are out of control,
And those many tears stream down my face instead of roll.

Noone fully understands the rain, it is misunderstood,
Even the weather man can't predict the rain noone ever could.
Just like the rain emmotional people can be hard to understand,
People say we are weak, or its attention that we demand.

We dont choose to feel this way, and usually depression takes a part,
But mainly we emotional souls just have such a big heart.
We feel things more intensely then others because we care so much,
When we see things that are heartbreaking or sad, its our souls that are touched.

Somtimes we understand and are sympathetic to things other people dont get,
We are definitely hard to deal with, but we can be one of the best people uv ever met.

So when talking to us watch what you say, be considerate and kind,
Because we can't just stop and leave our emotions behind.
You have no idea how much of a burden they can be,
If only you where us, u would know, you would see.

Just like the rain misunderstood and out of control,
This is what it feels like to be an emotional soul.


© 2016 cimmy wuv xxxooo


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The rain and our emotions. Both can be a wild storm.
"Just like the rain misunderstood and out of control,
This is what it feels like to be an emotional soul."
The above lines are true. Our emotions can make us feel wild and uncontrolled. Thank you dear poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Years Ago

Glad you agree :)
Thank you for the review :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.



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This poem is so sad and beautiful and full of strong emotions and feelings. Beautifully written!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Anjali

7 Years Ago

Mention not!
Wonderfully written. With great description. I enjoyed reading this. As I can relate to this completely. Nicely done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the review Paul :)
Paul

7 Years Ago

My pleasure Cimmy! :)
The rain and our emotions. Both can be a wild storm.
"Just like the rain misunderstood and out of control,
This is what it feels like to be an emotional soul."
The above lines are true. Our emotions can make us feel wild and uncontrolled. Thank you dear poet for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Years Ago

Glad you agree :)
Thank you for the review :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.
well said.. iv enjoyed it very much and i like ur choice of words, and i agree, i mean we are only humans, we have hearts that feel we're not machines we do get hurt easily and just like the rain we can fall when hurt and tear like the rain.

Thanks for sharing this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Years Ago

Thank you very glad you enjoyed this :)
Joey Nizz

7 Years Ago

Your welcome ^^
Fantastic imagery. You've captured how it feels so well. I can relate. Nice job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Thank u :)
Congrats on second place in the contest.Many people will be able to identify with your words, either because they themselves are emotional people or they know someone who is. This has good rhythm and flow. Good rhymes. I enjoyed reading.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) glad you enjoyed it
I enjoyed this immensely. The comparison is spot on. People often misunderstand and even look negatively on those that are expressive of their emotions - just like they tend to associate negative thoughts with rain. I have never understood this as I think rainy days are absolutely beautiful, and I even prefer them most of the time - just as I prefer to be around people that can honestly express how they feel in any given situation. Thanks for the great read, and keep up the good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your heart felt review.
Im glad you enjoyed it. :)
moonlit_cove

8 Years Ago

My pleasure!
This piece is really good:)
I like how you compare the rain to people and emotions,
"Misunderstood"
The flow is fantastic and positive feedback to readers as well,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Thanks james. Guess i had the same kinda ideas in my head as you when relating water to emotions. read more
I love the comparison between rain and emotions. It is true, that both are equally misunderstood. I wish more people would recognize this. This is beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Awww thanks Witty :P
WittyWonka

8 Years Ago

You are most welcome, cimmy :P
Oh my God, this is exactly what I always think! Being an overly emotional person, I totally understand what the person in this poem feels. I love how you compared such people with rain- sometimes it makes me happy, but then somtimes it makes me sad too. This was a wonderful read. Good job! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Polly

8 Years Ago

That'd be so awesome, but then again, it'd be so saddening if we can't even feel 'happiness' anymore.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Yer that's true. not feeling all together may suck lol
Polly

8 Years Ago

Yeah, it will, haha. xD

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