IS IT WRONG???

I have a wonderful boyfriend whom I love with all my heart,
Is it wrong... That i sometimes wish I could go back to the start.
About four years back where i was single and free,
Is it wrong... that I somtimes wish, I still could be.

When I was single I just sat and solked, wanting and waiting for love,
Was I wrong... not to open my eyes, and be free, fly like a dove.
I could hang out with all the guy mates i desired,
No worrying about anyone else, and no rules reqired.

I could have dated a guy without a temper, or a guy with much emotion,
Am I wrong... to have gone down that little river, without exploring the ocean.
I feel I have now missed out on the life of being single,
All because I didn't take advantage of it, I didn't mingle.

Though how was I meant to know my prince would get here so quick,
It just so happens my first real relationship seems like the right pick.
Would it be wrong... to sometimes sit and wonder, to wish and to think,
That I hadn't of wished my single life away in just a single blink.

Is it wrong to have these thoughts,
Is it wrong to feel this way,
Is it wrong in any sorts,
that this is what i say.

Is it wrong... that I still keep him in the dark to this day,
Is it wrong... that he doesn't know, but if he did, what would he say.
Is it wrong... and if it is, I don't know what to do.
But i know none of this is worth loosing you.

Because in my heart I know whats right, and thats what we have together,
I love you with everything, I have in me. our love, will never tether.

Reviews

[Tabby Mac]

I love the honest heart displayed here! I wondered this same thing many a years back and was not as strong as you. I learned the hard way that what I had was in deed right for me. But it was too late to turn back. Years, pain, and lessons were had until I got another chance at true love. Now I know longer wonder but the cost was great.
I'm proud of your honesty and your strength! We can all wonder but to deny its power is commendable! Great topic! Written so pure, innocent and raw! Well done!
Tabby

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I dont think im a strong person at all so for u to think or see that in my writing shocks me but also makes me happy.
Thanks for the amazing review much appreciated

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Also im very glad you're happy now :)

[Tabby Mac]

It's not weak to feel or question. It is weak to act on feelings, questions, temptations in life! Your poem speaks your strength!
❤

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwww thank you :)

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This is a wonderful display of the thoughts the comes to everyone's mind in a relationship. The longing to be free and not abiding by any relationship rules. This never goes away but at the end like you finished it, it is best at time to be with one who love you and you love them. It is a wonderful poem for self reflection. N.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you very much for the wonderful review

[Warrior]

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[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for your review. I can do that :)

[Lucien Maier]

our love, will never tether.
great line....

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you :)