LET LOVE BE!

About gay right!

Love is a wonderful thing that everyone will eventually find, 

Tall with small, fat with skinny, white with black, matters not, for love is blind.

Huge age gaps can be a little creepy, I for one am not a fan, 

Though as long as both people are over 18 its nothing to Ban. 

So if all these odd couples are aloud to date, 

why should it be different if your gay, not straight?

What gives people a right to judge and to hate?

Gays are people with feelings to, don't discriminate. 

Ever heard of the saying don't judge a book by its cover?

Well here's another good saying that i have just discovered...

Don't judge a gay by their sexuality, 

Get to know them and see there personality.

Everyone has a right to an opinion its true, 

But who people choose to date isn't up to you. 

Love comes in many different colors, sex's, sizes and forms,

But overall love is beautiful, and the heart it warms. 

So don't stop gay marriage, because you think its just not right, 

Let love be, how is it hurting you? people shouldn't have to fight. 

Stopping love is whats wrong, so stand up and don't take part, 

For people can't fight what they feel deep in there heart. 

Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

A very good message in your heart touching poem with a perfect rhyme.
Love is not a choice , it just happens. And we should respect feelings and preferences of other people.
Take a bow for writing on this subject.
Thanks for sharing this piece. Keep sharing.:-):-)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for your review :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

I loved it...
true facts... mostly people discriminate...
well, can't say more about it... even I have seen and I know, love is blind....completely and fully .... boundless and indistinct....
nicely penned dear... : )

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you for the lovely review

[Anindita Janhabee]

most welcome....

[D]

Ah. Hehehehe.... It's really weird, in the best possible way to read this. :)
Mostly came across...Well I won't describe what, about gay rights.

Well penned. :)))

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you for your review :)

[D]

My pleasure :)

[Troy Henson]

We are all human aren't we? Ive never judged nor felt the need to judge a book by its cover. This is a powerful write. Very brave, full of meaning and a message to those that still sit either on the fence or on the wrong side of the fence....get over it and join society as it is, I say!

Thank you for this uplifting piece.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Glad you liked it so much :) Thank you for your review :)

[Kaliope]

It always baffles me how people can be offended by two (or more ;-)) people loving each other. No matter what size, shape, color or gender - and science now begins to understand how blurred the lines really are - as long as there is mutual and informed consent, everyone has the right live and love the way they please. Btw, the age of consent isn't everywhere 18. In quite a few countries in Europe - mine included - it's actually fourteen.
But back to the review :-) Loved the flow, but found a few more typos:
Line 4: ...its nothing to Ban -> it's (& ban unless you wanted to emphasize it)
Line 5: ...aloud to date -> allowed
Line 6: ...if your gay -> you're
Line 8: ...with feelings to -> too
Line 12: ...there personality-> their
Line 13: ...its true -> it's
Line 17: ...its just not right -> it's
Line 19: ...whats wrong -> what's
Line 20: ...deep in there heart -> their
If you're interested in a correction tool (not just spelling but grammar too) there's one called Ginger. The full version is rather expensive, but there's a free one as well that would have caught almost all errors.

To summarize: I liked this poem a lot, the message is so important and one that can't be repeated often enough. While I'm usually not that fond of pictures (I often find that they distract too much from the text), I think the ones you chose here fit very well and underline the message. So great piece of work, I enjoyed it very much!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for your very long wonderful review, I will have to get around to fixing up the spelling errors.
Glad you liked the poem so much :)

[dan]

cimmy, a little older one would like to chime in. I'm 59 and I was fortunate through my life to be surrounded by open-minded people. I was also fortunate to have worked with gays throughout my life. Regular people they were, with senses of humor, feelings, faults and brain-farts...just like me. I could watch the same sex marriage issue from its genesis. I'm seeing weed, my patron saint, be at a place where it will be legal in all 50 states and federal too. I knew I'd see that too.
Change is always happening, improvements happen slowly but believe me that world, with all ITS faults, still keeps improving. Again, your writing is improving so much and I've been glad to bear witness. take care...dan

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This means allot that u think so highly of my poetry and that not only you but others as well see the improvments in my poetry. I honestly think some of my newest ones are not as good as sone of my older ones. I also don't really recognize the improvments but the fact tgat others do makes me really glad.

[Blackheart]

Indeed, love should be free from barriers of gender, race and sexuality. People need to open their minds and accept people the way they are. Love is the most exquisite of all emotions and labelling it in any way is something which should not be done. Beautifully written and signifies a very important message.

There are a few typo mistakes though.
Couples instead of coupes in the 7th line.
Here's instead of hears in the 12th line.
Their instead of there in the 14th line.
:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you ill fix that up.
Thanks for the review glad you liked it :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Love. That is what it's all about, this life thing. And your voice just screams of the need for us to put everything else aside and find what can fill this world with more. Keep the song going, no matter who tries to tell you to shut it down. Nothing else really matters. xo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for the wonderful review :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Thank you for being a flame in a very cold world. xo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

anytime :)

[Dead]

This is great!!!! :D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you :)

[Inject Positivity]

Wow!!!! I mean how many people are there who would think about writing a poem on this topic? This is your first work i read and it has given me some very important inspiration.....I really felt the meaning and purpose of this poem....The choice of words are quite spectacular......Absolute class.....Clap! Clap! Well done my frnd.....Full rating....

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwww thank you so much for this wonderful review :)
Glad you enjoyed it so much :)

[Inject Positivity]

You are always welcome with a smile frnd....

[-inactive now-]

Hell yes. At the end of the day we are all humans with the right to love and live whatever way feels right to us. Whatever way that may be.
Good on ya for writing this poem. It's a brilliant poem with a loud, clear and heartful message.
Nice work :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Glad you enjoyed my poem. :)
Thanks for the review :)

[-inactive now-]

No worries :)