WRITE YOUR STORY ON MY HEART!

I got inspired by a song again.

Everyone has many emotions, we all have so much to say, 

So pick up your pen, use my heart as your paper, and take it away.

Write your story on my heart, make a mark, make me feel, 

Tell me everything, good or bad, just let it be real. 

Theirs still so much empty space in my heart, 

So many blank pages for all of you to fill. 

So jolt down your most priceless art, 

With your words, leave me speechless, if you will. 

I love hearing all your story's, in me you can confide, 

Tell me all your secrets, with me you don't need to hide.

I love being there to listen, and maybe offer some advice, 

With me there's no catch at all, I'm just being nice. 

No matter where you are, I'm calling every nation, 

The things you write, could be my inspiration. 

Once your in my life, you will discover, 

I really am unique and like no other. 

Share your story with me, so I can share mine with you, 

One can never have to many friends, after all, isn't that true?

Write your story on my heart, make an impact on my heart and soul, 

Maybe when we all come together as one, we can be whole!

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I can't speak about yours but this just felt like a giant hug to mine:) already I am sitting here thinking whatever gets written on that heart of yours better be golden cause you are! what an incredibly lovely way to be... maybe this is just a figment of my imagination and I am dreaming... pinch pinch nope you are real! thank the stars oh and i love the rhyme and flow to this and you know my opinion of the content beautiful

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwwww thanks so much for the lovley review

[Davidgeo]

I've read this before, years ago I think... I never said anything back then because I figured you'd catch it eventually or someone you knew better would let you know. But I stumbled across this again today and noticed that the same errors still remain after over 1K views and 19 reviews...

Second stanza, 1st line... "Theirs" should be "There is" or "There's". 3rd line... I'm betting "jolt" should be "jot".

4th stanza, 1st line... "story's" is actually not really a word, "stories" is the appropriate way to pluralize story.

It's a good poem. It's a shame it's peppered with those really simple mistakes. It's even more of a shame no one gave you a legitimate review after 3 years and over a thousand views. I'm pretty sure most people on this site leave comments simply out of the expectation that they get comments back... they don't actually give a s**t and half the time I don't even think they read the work. Or maybe I'm just cynical.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I honestly dont think little spelling errors matter to much. And I never get around to fixing em. But I'm glad you like my work so much that you just want to help that much. I'll try get around to fixing it. Thanks for caring

[Davidgeo]

You don't think spelling errors matter much? Ugh... okay then.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

No not little ones I dont. Only if I went to publish it I would make sure it was perfect

[Davidgeo]

Whatever floats your boat

[Suhd]

Wonderful piece of writing. Inspiring stuff.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[writ rajat]

very nicely written and great cimy

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks for your comment

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Share your story with me, so I can share mine with you,
One can never have to many friends, after all, isn't that true?
Write your story on my heart, make an impact on my heart and soul,
Maybe when we all come together as one, we can be whole!

Beautiful lines to express the beauty of an open heart. Nice poem and title is perfect for this poem.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[WillaDanvers]

This is beautiful :) It really made me smile, and you're right - there is no limit to the friends we can have :) Keep writing! :D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[barleygirl]

I really love the open, honest, welcoming tone of your message. In today's world where people barely stick around to listen to any heartsong that lasts longer than the typical short attention span or sound byte, I think everyone is craving exactly what you've written here. We are writers, so we can pour it out even if we don't have an audience, but there are many others (non-writers) who never open up their hearts to the light of day becuz they never feel there's someone who cares about their story. This could be a lesson about how to be a friend. As cynical as I am in my old age, I believe your beckoning message.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yer everyone needs someone to listen to them somtimes someone to care.
Unfortunately theres to many selfish people these days that dont take the time to listen or simply dont want to.
Glad you understood my message and took your time to leave me another awesone review :)

[I Am Svetlana]

I just got the chance to read this & it's almost identical to my poem "Blank Paper Heart", just like you said! I'm so inspired by how hearts remain blank until people come into our lives & we allow them to etch their stories down onto them. So powerful as how it takes us often so long in order to realize such a simple fact, but very empowering nonetheless. I hope you've gotten some good stories imprinted upon your once blank heart & that you take time to cherish them for lifetimes to come! Beautiful words you created with this one. Keep it up!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love this poem I wrote its one of my favourites I thought it was a cleaver write. It really is about the exact same thing your poem was about. People making there mark on your once blank heart. I think both our poems are very meaningful. Glad you really enjoyed this poem.
Funny how we both thought of the same very cleaver and unique idea for a poem.

[I Am Svetlana]

I really did enjoy this & glad to know that we often write on similar topics. I'm sure we'll do more of that in the future and not realize it until we mention it in a review. Haha. I'm always free to collaborate sometime, if you ever happen to be interested!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yer I have never collaborated with anyone before, that might be fun.

[I Am Svetlana]

Great, it's not too difficult once you get the hang of it. I used to collaborate with other writers, but soon lost touch with them after awhile, so...I'm stuck Writing by myself, but it's always interesting to see what two people can create together. It's not for every writer, but I encourage everyone to try it at least once, to see if it works for them or not, you know?

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

No harm in trying it. How does it work, do you write one part and I add to it or?

[I Am Svetlana]

Pretty much. We can just think of a topic & each write a part, then put them together to see how it turns out.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awesomeness!!!

[Inject Positivity]

In this world there are so many people who are alone, they have many stories to tell, many thoughts to share but they hardly find anyone to listen to them... Your poem gives them confidence to express themselves, that there are people like you who are always willing to listen to them... A very selfless write with full of compassion and kindness... Well done mate...

Note: did you mean "there's" in the first line of the second stanza?

Sincerely
Dhiman

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yes i did haha my bad.
Thank you for the review glad you like this poem. :)

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

kept it upbeat and true to your own words. i liked it. of course i have to pick the s**t out of it or else i didnt like it right? theirs isnt quite right there´s is better. jolt or jot? and too instead of to in the right places. anyway, grammer nazi in the building. im really impressed with what people can do when they aren´t trying to sound like someone else.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks again lol. Ill get around to fixing it when its not 5 in the morning, or if i can be bothered.