WRITE YOUR STORY ON MY HEART!

I got inspired by a song again.

Everyone has many emotions, we all have so much to say, 

So pick up your pen, use my heart as your paper, and take it away.

Write your story on my heart, make a mark, make me feel, 

Tell me everything, good or bad, just let it be real. 

Theirs still so much empty space in my heart, 

So many blank pages for all of you to fill. 

So jolt down your most priceless art, 

With your words, leave me speechless, if you will. 

I love hearing all your story's, in me you can confide, 

Tell me all your secrets, with me you don't need to hide.

I love being there to listen, and maybe offer some advice, 

With me there's no catch at all, I'm just being nice. 

No matter where you are, I'm calling every nation, 

The things you write, could be my inspiration. 

Once your in my life, you will discover, 

I really am unique and like no other. 

Share your story with me, so I can share mine with you, 

One can never have to many friends, after all, isn't that true?

Write your story on my heart, make an impact on my heart and soul, 

Maybe when we all come together as one, we can be whole!

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I can't speak about yours but this just felt like a giant hug to mine:) already I am sitting here thinking whatever gets written on that heart of yours better be golden cause you are! what an incredibly lovely way to be... maybe this is just a figment of my imagination and I am dreaming... pinch pinch nope you are real! thank the stars oh and i love the rhyme and flow to this and you know my opinion of the content beautiful

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwwww thanks so much for the lovley review

[emmajoy]

Many hearts take to the stage where they can perform, share, portray and more. Then, there are those hearts that need to linger in the wings, shadows private and personal. Whichever, they're tender, able to take yet sometimes, fade a while, feel heavy,, then rest, numb until one of other quarter, picks up a cheery burst of share and share about, Yours is a giving heart, content in how time flies, goes, returns, refreshed. Lovely words, finely put.. worth of super worth.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks so much :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is beautiful really lovely I enjoyed the read thanks 🙏

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

No thank you for tge review

[Lucas C. M.]

That was really good. You did a really fine job with it!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[Jibey]

The is a song of welcome and warmth, with a lovely romanticism that lights up the darker moments of life. Much much we need to touch each other's hearts and to have that feeling of growing together and sharing. It makes life worth living.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very true.
Thanks fir the wonderful review :)

[Adam Adams]

fair enough. well and nicely jolted down. liked the way how smoothly you have penned down the feelings of one's heart into suchness of words. looking forward to reading your work, shortly.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank u :)

[Adam Adams]

my pleasure, beauty. 🥂🍾

[Chris Shaw]

So much warmth in your lines cimmy. This poem is written well and is so appealing. Nicely done.

Chris

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I appreciate ur reviews :)

[HadesRising]

Truly beautiful, liked this piece.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[LitStar]

transparency that begs to the reader like red ink to the quill

thanks for the open literary heart

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank u fir ur review

[LitStar]

you're welcome

[adichie]

What a beautiful message. It reminds me of a song from a long time ago that talked about putting hands in hands. It’s the connection that makes us whole, the smartest and healthiest thing we humans do.:):)

Hugely enjoyed!!!

Adix

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks darl