MY INSPIRATION!

Sometimes life It gets me down, 

Sometimes I want to just give in.

Sometimes I seem to wear a frown.

Sometimes I just can't seem to win. 

I want to do more, say goodbye to the life I'm living now,

I want to build a bright future, I just don't know how. 

I want to believe that anything is possible, but that's simply not true,

I want things that I just don't think will happen, Then I think of you.

You're my Inspiration, in many more ways then one, 

You're my Inspiration, you make me believe things can be done.

You're my Inspiration, my beam of sunshine in the dark,

You're my Inspiration, when I'm about to give up, you ignight my spark.

You're my Inspiration, when I write, and I think that clearly shows.

You're my Inspiration, and I think that everybody knows. 

You're my inspiration, my amazing lover, loving,loyal, and brave.

Because of you I'm better with money and I now know how to save.

You're my Inspiration, When I'm lazy you push me to get things done,

You're my Inspiration, So I do them even when there not that fun. 

You're my Inspiration, I'm a better person since I meet you, I hope that does show,

You're my Inspiration, and I love you so much, I just thought i'd let you know. 

Reviews

[Rache David]

I want to believe that anything is possible, but that's simply not true,
I want things that I just don't think will happen, Then I think of you.

These are my favorite lines...
I just simply feel related with the latter...
I was supposed to give up because it's really what the world wants...
Then I just remember, "Him" and my feelings.. So now I wanna keep going.. :-)
Very nice and sweet poem... I can see you're really inspired writing this..
Great job...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thank you :)

[Rache David]

you're welcome...:-)

[cycy]

ncaaawww this is just a sweet poem cimmy i wuv wuv wuvv it very well written and the last line is just a great close to the poem..xo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I wuv wuv wuv ur review. Thank chu :)

[Crazycatgirl_10]

I really liked the first stanza. I often feel like that but my inspiration (my friends and God) reminds me that life is worth living. Love this poem!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks for the wonderful review :)

[AprilRN1210]

A moving tribute to one that inspires you, that lifts you up, that drives you to continue when doubts creep in, that supports you when feeling lost, that makes you want to be a better person. We are truly blessed to have people like this in our lives. You have written and expressed this beautifully here. This was a joy to read. Well done.. **on a side note** I would capitalize " I'd" in the last line.. :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you so much for the wonderful review :)
Glad you enjoyed it :)

[MsJewel]

It is wonderful to have someone to inspire you to do all the things you want to do, be all that you can be.

This is lovely.

:) Julie

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you Julie :)
It sure is, don't know what id do without him :)

[Penny]

I want to build a bright future, I just dont know how... I feel exactly the same. Cant tell you how much I canrelate to this. Also reminds me of my pooem inspiration, just that it is about your love which makes it all so sweet and personal. Awsm write.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks Penny, Ill have to check out you're's sometime soon then :)

[Penny]

My pleasure. And hun you have already read mine, remember the one about a tree and autumn.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Oh my memories horrible, but im sure I loved it then :P

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

This seems like a sequel to your last poem. I like the message and feeling in this one. It's a like a breath of fresh air coming off the other one. But together, back to back, the last two poems transition very well.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks for the feedback Michael, means allot. Glad you like them :)

[ayele marie dalmeida]

Love the thoughtfulness,and you have a really nice glow. You let the readers know how important and inspiring that person is . Whoever this is for is so lucky to have you in their life . Thanks for sharing , Amazing piece ,loved it ❤

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for the sweet words, and lovley review :) It is about my boyfriend :)

[ayele marie dalmeida]

he is one lucky guy and you're welcome :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Haha i think im the lucky one :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Brilliant imagery and great transitions!

You have done a great job in writing this complete poem, I could relate to it and so I liked it.

Thanks for inviting me to read your very well written master piece.

I feel like I went on a journey and saw all those images!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you hun Your reviews are wonderful :)