CIMMY TOPIA!

How the world would be if I were in charge!

I recently wrote about the real world that sucks, 

about people struggling to earn a cupple of bucks. 

Now this is a poem about how the world would be, 

If this word were run by the one and only Cimmy.

If I were in control there would be plenty I would change,

gay marriage would be legalized, and vows would be exchanged.

People that are poor, would get allot more benefits then the rich,

for those filled with wealth and greed, lets just say I can be a real b***h. 

The world would be filled with chocolate,

and smokes would be no more.

The world would slowly become a better place, 

of this I am quite sure.

Prison wouldn't be filled with the luxuries, that its filled with these days,

Depending on the crime, I'll make sure there punished in all the right ways.

For men that are rapists, you're all just mentally sick, 

You know what will happen to you, for you don't deserve you're dick.

I"ll make sure people get work, and aren't' left out on the street.

I'll make sure those poor homeless kids have more food to eat.

Boats arriving to Australia, will be told to turn straight back,

You're not getting in so easily, I dare ya, go on, take another crack.

The world will be a much better place to be, 

If someone were to hand the crown to me.

Cimmy topia would be this worlds new name,

and I'd go down in the hall of fame!

Reviews

[cycy]

For men that are rapists, you're all just mentally sick,

You know what will happen to you, for you don't deserve you're dick

-hahahah wellwritten Cimmy, you definitely get my vote, cimmy for president indeed :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Haha yay, to bad I can't run :P

[Laura Harrison]

You'd most definitely get my vote! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha :P Im not born to be a leader haha im a follower but wrote this anyway :P'

[Penny]

ANd yes it is election season here in India. Come here, if not the world you may get the chance to rule world's largest democracy. I'll vote for you

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

HAHA! Thanks Penny :P

[Penny]

As interesting as it name. You have won my heart with that fourth stanza and that thought of yours about gay marriage. Thought provoking and light too, you have a well balanced piece there. Keep writing like this.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks Penny so glad you enjoyed this piece :)
Glad you liked my thoughts on gay Marriage.....

[Penny]

My pleasure. And frankly anyone who is sensible and psychologically fit would like your thought, would even support it

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yer I don't understand what people have against someone else falling in love... and how it affects them....

[Madalyn Beck]

A chocolate world - YUM! You have an amazing write here, my dear! Great job with it! Your world sounds like a fantastic place to be! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks Hun for you're review :P
Im glad you like the sounds of it :P
I do to, unfortunately we can keep dreaming because we both know there will never be a Cimmy topia :P

[Bowers]

wow, what a powerful woman you are, a great ruler for sure! (I WOULD PUT YOU IN CHARGE! ) HAHA, why dont YOU run for president!???? :D HAHA ! yes! you again, wrote a beautiful piece, filled with awesome ideas, written in, yet again, a perfect way. You never fail to amaze me, dear friend. Loved it.!
Becky

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwww thank you hun, wish i could be in charge haha.
Thanks for another beautiful review :)

[Frieda P]

Enjoyed your chocolate world....what's with no one is allowed to visit Australia though, killjoy, ;-) I hear it's grand.

'your dick'...even though they are. I concur there....

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for you're review frieda.
No I didn't mean they can't visit, I just don't think people should all be able to live there because its becoming way to over populated. Not to be rude.

[annabellee]

Haha, this was a really great poem. I enjoyed your little Cimmy-topia :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha thanks Anna :P

[annabellee]

you're welcome :)

[Tina Louise UK]

Good one hunni...I would like to live in that world x

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

HAHA! Yer it would be an amazing world :P
You're welcome :)

[mark]

wow! this is great babe...can u run australia please? lol that will be awesome :)
its got such true meaning to this babe, the boaters get in so easily its bullshit, while others cant get in or anything...
they feel sorry for them so they let them in but yeah i think abbott stopped that now which is good.
i love this poem babe.. its got great rhyming and awesome meaning behind it.
i love all of your poems :) but i love you more hehe.
well done babe :) keep up the great work xxxooo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

He he thank chu hun.
HAHA! I wish :P
Yer thank god he stopped it, that needed to be stopped.
Thanks again hun :)

[mark]

i think they r letting them in again. no worries sweety :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

really god sake lol.