MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

A guy who is in love with a woman who is a mess in many way's.

Everymorning you rise from your sleep, 

Everymorning theres secrets you keep. 

Everymorning you have a messy head of hair, 

Every morning I'll always be there. 

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

Your wall is up, for you've had a tough life,

Your wall is up, but someday ill tear it down.

Your wall is up, oneday i'll make you my wife,

Your wall is up, you always wear a frown,

but someday i'll turn it upside down.

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

Never happy with how you look, 

Always wanting someone to hold.

Never easy to read, nor an open book,

Always crying out in the cold. 

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

One day when your walls come down, 

I'll drive away the hurt and pain. 

One day when you come around, 

I know i can make you happy again. 

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

I'll pull you up and onto your feet, 

Ill hold you close and never let you fall.

Because your best girl i'll ever meet,

You're worth it all.

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

Everynight I'll watch you as you sleep,

Everynight for you're the one i'll cherish and keep.

Everynight I'll smile to myself as i lay in our bed,

Everynight I dream of the day we will be Wed!

MY BEAUTIFUL MESS!

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

This is truly powerful. One is truly lucky to have someone who will stand by them through thick and thin, accept and love them as they are, and soothingly let them relax a bit more and open up at their own pace. And it is possible if two people want it to happen and work at it together!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for the wonderful review :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

you are welcome

[Great Aunt Astri]

I hope she goes on being a beautiful mess ... he seems to like it! A good poem, satisfying to read. Well done.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you for you're review :)

[Anita Singh]

So easy to love this poem. I dont know where to begin. The title speaks for itself. My heart's full after reading this. Love it, Cimmy.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

aww thanks hun glad you enjoyed it :)

[chitra dhara]

Beautifully written...
"One day when your walls come down,
I'll drive away the hurt and pain.
One day when you come around,
I know i can make you happy again. "...So touching..I feel like crying..Love your work!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks for your wonderful review, so glad you liked my work and that it touched you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You write the coolest things and the most beautiful mes( compliment)s...Bravo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you very much for you're review :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Saumya]

o wow...this was such an adorable piece cimmy!:) i really loved this write. Apart from the beautiful and lovely rhyming, i could completely feel the inner beauty bestowed deeply in the girl's heart, only visible to a real lover:) love really has an essence, and your poem proved it:)

also one of the things i admire about this write is the positivity. The lover mentioned here is not a common, but a real lover who loves the girl despite being messy:) and this is what we call, the beauty of love:)

also this poem has an essential element important for every stable relation,ie. hope
the lover is hopeful and not demanding. kind, and not cruel and has deep faith in his love. and nature too is suppportive with the beings who follow its rule:)

all in all i completely enjoyed and loved your write:) i also loved its simplicity
i rarely read romantic writes, but i should admit here, that your write was so so lovely, that i couldn't take my eyes off for even a single moment:)!

well done and happy writing:)
saumya

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Wow this review means allot to me, I love getting these reviews, I hate the one lined ones, there not even reviews. Its reviews like this that make me smile. Thank you so so much, glad you enjoyed.

[Saumya]

you r highly welcomed cimmy, m glad too
that you enjoyed my review
:) your poem deserved that! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awww thanks you are sweet :)

[Saumya]

lol.. you're very welcome n ur sweet too:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awww thanks hun ::)))

[Saumya]

lol..:) :) :) :) :) :)

[Shaquana Adams]

An adorable romantic piece. I enjoyed very much :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank chu glad you enjoyed :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

This poem is wonderful and beautiful! Great job!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[Priyanshi Dass]

A beautifully written piece. This is a mighty fine poetic piece penned. A very intense write and a most enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing and best of luck.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you hun much appreciated. God bless :)

[Eric Pudalov]

Cimmy, once again a very interesting and lovely piece that is essentially you! And one of the things that's particularly cool about this one is the style in which you've written it.

For example, the way you put "Everymorning" as one word in the first stanza - that may not have been on purpose, but I actually like it better that way, especially considering that the theme is "my beautiful mess." It's as if things like the way the poem is structured and spelled go with what you're saying.

That is one of my favorite things about poetry - there are many "happy accidents." Awhile back, I'd entered a contest with this magazine called "Poetyr." It was misspelled on purpose to represent the idea of the happy accident in a poem, misspelling something and actually making it sound better.

I do have one critique, though - in the 2nd to last verse, it says "Because your best girl i'll ever meet." I think you intended to say, "Because you're [the] best girl I'll ever meet." Other than that, I really liked it, and keep on writing!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you so much your reviews are wonderful, and not one lined like some i get are lol... I don't know if I even would call those ones reviews.
You really put you're time and effort into reviewing, I really enjoyed reading you're reviews.

That was on purpose hehe, I wanted to write this one out that way glad you liked that.
Ill fix that up thanks :)
Thank you once again :)

[Eric Pudalov]

You're welcome! I like writing the reviews almost as much as I like writing poetry. It feels like a form of journalism! :-)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yer i quite enjoy giving people feedback. When i really enjoy there poem sometimes I am sad to see it end, because I want to keep reading haha.

[Eric Pudalov]

Awww, that's so sweet of you!! Well, I suppose you can always read it again! In fact, that reminds me - I was going to write a "part 2" to one of my poems. Perhaps I'll do that today...thank you for the inspiration (even if it was unintentional).

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your most welcome so glad I could inspire you :)