ILL ALWAYS REMEMBER, THOSE DAYS OF DECEMBER!

A story i randomly thought of about a girls one true love :)

Let me tell you a story,

about a man ill never forget. 

A man with honor and glory,

A man who'd never regret.

It was back in my teenage years,

I was still in school, while he was at war.

For him, i had such worries such fears,

Our country he was out fighting for.

The months would go by April, June and November,

I would only get to see him every December.

Those where the months id feel so alive, 

Those where the months id watch him arrive. 

For he came to my home town every December, 

Those were the days ill always remember.

The war was over but only for another year,

After December he'd leave again, and id shed a tear. 

One December he looked at me as he held my hand, 

as we sat together by the beach in the sand.

He looked into my eyes and smiled as he said,

One day when this war is over ill make sure your be wed.

For someday whenever that may be, 

Ill get down on one knee.

Ill promise you always and forever,

Then we will always be together. 

I looked up at him and smiled through my tears, 

He wiped them away, but he couldn't wipe away my fears.

For every time he would go i knew he may never return, 

And the thought of that made more then my stomach churn.

That next December, i waited for hes boat to dock, 

i waited and watched, but he never came.

Devastated but i saw this coming it wasn't a shock. 

So today on the day of hes death i just sit and remember, 

For Ill always remember those days of December. 

So as i take this last pill, I surrender myself to heaven above,

I'm going to him, for he is my one true love!

 

Reviews

[mark]

this is so sad how she only sees him every December.
it will be really hard for any girl when their man goes to war. they will be wondering day to day if they will come back or not.
its full of emotion and sadness...but at the same time its great to read.
very sad ending where he didn't come back at all :/ hits your heart :(
well done babes :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks for the review babes :) It means a lot, im glad you liked the story :)
Thank you for taking the time to review my stuff :)
You truly have the best reviews :)

[mark]

hehe aww you're welcome babe :) i always have time for you...sorry i took awhile to review your stuff i dont usually go on this much anymore but i still managed to find the time hehe :) i love you

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

When you did today, your reviews were great :) thank you :)

[mark]

you're welcome :) hehe

[Marimartha Mardynz]

Truly sad. I felt the pain too. Curses to death.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you :)

[cycy]

wow, this is just really good and captivating and wonderfully written and deep and intense and emotional and lovely and just so..perfect. i know i put too many 'ands' but that's just how great your poem is dear. this is just really really good. I'll probably run out of words soon but just know that the poem is breathtaking and beautiful. loved it.well done hey.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwww thank you so much :) that means so much :) this was a lovley review :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Well done, this is a wonderfully crafted. piece. Sad, but so affecting. You did a great job with this.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thank you so glad you enjoyed it :)

[Johanna]

Wow.. amazing poem, but so sad :(( the words were all beautiful, and great rhyming, you have a gift! Just one quick question.. where were they seeing as they were on a beach in December? Did you have a place in mind when you wrote the poem? :)

Really amazing job! keep writing
-Johanna

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Na i didn't have any particular place in mind. I just pictured any old random beach haha. Thank you so much this means allot when people tell me i really have a gift :) Makes me feel great about myself :) Thank you for your kind words :)

[annabellee]

wow this is a really sad and emotional and well thought-out story.
Well done :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks Anna glad you enjoyed :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[Sarmelendez]

this is so amazing! I really love how you captured this its so heart felt and touching

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks Sarah so glad you enjoyed it :)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

This was amazing! I personally know exactly how this feels so, like the comment below says, if you just came up with this, then you are on talented writer. Because this was awesome. I could've gone on reading this for hours! It portrayed everything so perfectly.. "And the thought of that made more than my stomach churn.." Perfect line! Absolutely perfect poem! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Wow is it really that good? Im glad to write things that my readers really get into and enjoy. Your review made me smile and feel really good about my poetry :) Thanks for your kind words Maggie :)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

It was! It was beautiful :) You're most welcome, anytime!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

:) thanks that really means alot :)

[Laura Harrison]

To say that you randomly thought of this, it's amazing! I can imagine it must be a terrible thing to be the girlfriend/wife of a soldier and have to wait for them to return home. I actually tried writing a poem about this once, but I couldn't finish it :(

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yer it would be insanely hard. You should try again :) i have another like this called memory of you, thats about war to :) Im so glad you liked it :) thanks for your review Laura

[Laura Harrison]

I will do :) ok I shall check it out, you're welcome

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

:) :) :) :)