MEMORY OF YOU!

A poem i wrote that just came to me, After reading and reviewing someone's poems about this subject, they inspired me :)

I still remember it clear as day,

The letter that stopped my heart.

A letter telling me you'd passed away,

The letter that tore me Apart.

Broken promise's you made,

Telling me you'd return.

I wish you listened to me and stayed,

instead its your ashes i watched burn. 

I had no one i only had you, 

Now you have gone and died on me to....

We talked about a future, 

We were soon to be Wed

We were going to have a baby,

Who we would call Ned. 

Every night i wake up in a sweat,

having bad dreams i wish i could forget.

I turn beside me looking for comfort,

as i shake and scream. 

I soon relise your not here 

that this isn't a dream.

The day of your funeral i couldn't bring myself to show,

As i sat at that place the place we called ours.

I looked over the edge of that cliff knowing i wanted to go.

There was nothing here for me anymore, 

I still wondered why you had to go to war.

It wasn't fair i was angry yet sad,

i wasn't scared of death in fact i was glad. 

There was nothing left for me here,

My life on earth was through.

I closed my eyes jumped off the edge,

Falling into a deep sea of blue.

Soon i would be there in heaven with you.

Reviews

[Neon]

You know the meaning of true love very well .. this's yer best poem ever ...

There was nothing left for me here,
My life on earth was through.
I closed my eyes jumped off the edge,
Falling into a deep sea of blue.
Soon i would be there in heaven with you....

This phrase's awesome and awesomely penned into the words with yer feeling of love.. about someone.. True love never goes to die but lives forever into the bottom of the heart of love .. with peace and joy. The sadness brings some pain and tears but the happiness keeps ya or takes ya away from the world of pain and bribery to the world of love and peace where only the true lovers can exist ... Cool ...

It's an awesome job by ya .. am thrilled by yer cool confidence of love .. your feelings about love's so pure and peaceful. Your the true lover that spread only love .. don't give pain but live always into the heart of someone ... Keep on. Your cool.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks i enjoyed reading your review. I hate when i get reviews like great write.... thats all they put really, not even worth reading.
Thanks for such an awesome review, im glad you like my stuff :)

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Very powerful poem! Loosing someone is never easy.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

yer i wouldnt know i have never lost anyone i mean i know it would be hard and i have a fair idea, but yer havnt lost anyone yet, this peace wasn't about me. Im glad you liked it thanks for your review :)

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Welcome I have lost many friends even one dear friend last week to cancer, but cancer wasn't her disease! Her disease was love !

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

im sorry to here that :(

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Ty she will be missed but ill see her again so im happy for that:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

yw you sure will when the time is right :)

[Sami Khalil]

A very sad tale . A splendid poem...:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks Sami glad you enjoyed

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)

[Me]

so very hun, really well done :) x

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks yer was a lil sad :)

[annabellee]

Good write, I always like your poems that tell a story. Even though this was a sad one.
Well done :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks Anna. yer i like those ones to :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[MikeV]

Great write! :) very sad, atleast in the end
they'll be together in heaven

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

glad you liked it.
Just thought of it off the top of my head :)
They will :)

[NeiL ArandA]

Lots of emotions conveyed in this poem . Cleverly written and every words are all well thought of . This life we live in does not always play fair . Very impressive poem !

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks so much for your review :)
sure doesn't :)
so glad you like it :)

[Riding the Rainbow]

oh my..this is too painful to read again..you did a good job..

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

ha ha was it that emotional? thanks :)

[mark]

wow what a great story!
this is one of my favourites of yours very clever write babe i love it.
its a very enjoyful read and very emotional poem.
its really good though im gonna save this to my favourites its great
keep up the great work babe :)
i love you :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awwww you really like it that much :)
thanks for your sweet words babe :)
your a sweet heart:")

[mark]

you're welcome :) yeah i do its really good