KISS ME!

A poem i wrote for my boyfriend :)

I love the way you kiss me,

Morning noon and night. 

I love the way you kiss me,

It always feels so right.

You always give me shivers,

that run down my spine.

My body shakes and quivers,

I smile knowing your mine.

I love the way you kiss me,

no matter where we are,

weather were at home, on a walk

or even in your car.

I love the way it feels,

when our lips slowly meet.

Its only then my fate seals

and i know with you im complete.

So kiss me baby anyplace, anytime, anywhere ;)

cause quite frankly i love you to much to care. 

Other people glance over, think what they may,

I smile when you show me off anyway :)

I love the way you kiss me,

Morning noon and night.

I love the way you kiss me,

your my Mr Right :)

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Cimmy, I smiled the whole time I was reading this. I can tell that you and your boyfriend are very much in love with each other. Wow. Best wishes for both of you. :)

As for the poem, I like the effortless flow of thoughts. Good rhythm and pacing and all that. I also admire your effective rhyme scheme. And I enjoy the images as well.

I love the way it feels,
when our lips slowly meet.
Its only then my fate seals
and i know with you im complete.


and

So kiss me baby anyplace, anytime, anywhere ;)
cause quite frankly i love you to much to care.
Other people glance over, think what they may,
I smile when you show me off anyway :)


I love the way you kiss me,
Morning noon and night.
I love the way you kiss me,
your my Mr Right :)

-My favorite stanzas oozing with sweetness of romance. :)

Just one little thing, though. Some of the words are misspelled but that's something you can work on easily. :) :)

P.S. This poem makes me want to have a b oyfriend, too. Lol :D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awww your review is the best review i have ever received :) thank you blue you made my day, you really gave me a huge review :) Thanks so much for taking your time to review this :) I know your a busy woman :P

Im so glad you liked it :)
I know my spelling sucks and thats with spell check, you should see it without that on paper lol....
Awww you seem like an amazing girl, your guys out there i know he is :)

[mark]

awwwwwwww thanks sweetheart i love it hehe :)
You're the sweetest.
I show u off anywhere i'm not afraid to do so :) i love u too much to even worry about that.
if i love u i'm definitely going to show u off :)
one of the best ones you wrote me :) it really put a smile on my face this morning.
great thing to wake up to :)
thank you!
i love you! :) xxxooo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Im so glad i could make you smile this morning babe.
Im glad you liked it:)
i love how your like that not many guys are your something special :)
Your welcome hun
Love you more mwa xxxooo

[mark]

hehe thank you gorgeous ^_^

[MikeV]

Very nice! we definitely have the same writing style :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Thanks for reviewing :)
Not just this one but allot of my work :)
im glad you like my stuff :)
we do :)