A REAL MAN!

A poem about men with respect, men who love and care so much about the girl they love. Most importantly men that think with there heart not there dick. this is my idea of A REAL MAN. Enjoy everyone.

A real man thinks 

with there heart not there dick,

A real man doesn't

act cocky and slick.

A real man will.....

touch your heart and soul, 

A real man will.....

play there role.

A real man has

much respect,

A real man 

doesn't neglect.

A real man is 

not afraid to cry,

A real man will

promise to try.

A real man will show you 

hes love for you is deep,

Its a real man you 

should cherish and keep.

For A real man doesn't 

come around much these days,

and when a real man

really loves you he stays.

So ladies that are lucky enough

to catch a real man,

hold on to him and keep him

for as long as you can.

Show him what hes worth

and treat him well,

because a good man

can change in time will tell.

Real men deserve our

respect and trust back,

because a real man is

on the right track. 

If hes hurt to much

you should know, 

that good men can come

and good men can go.

A real man can change

around for the worst,

Im just glad 

i got to mine first.

To give him the respect he deserved

to treat him right,

To kiss and cuddle him

each and every night.

So now i hold him so tight

never to let go, 

for he is the last real man

i might ever know.

For now a real man he will stay,

and  forever i will love him this way. 

Author's Note

Another recent write
about real men obviously and what i think a real man is :) End part also about my own real man
please review much appreciated.

Reviews

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There is a great deal of truth in your words here.....

Especially in this modern era where there is so much lack of respect for elders, parents and women, the real man as you have described him is indeed becoming an endangered species. The thing that strikes me most about this poem is that you know within yourself, that as a woman, you must also treat your man with the respect that he deserves, too. A very valid point, and one which is often overlooked.
Your rhyme flows very well throughout this poem. Very well done indeed.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Yes unfortunately its true there is not many good men left on this earth. Some of the ones that are good are not respected they get taken advantage of, and treated poorly by woman, so some good men change and that's very sad.
Thank you for a wonderful review :)

[Account Closed]

I like this! You have no fear in you're writing and I love that! The way you open up real feelings is great!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thats me 100 percent honest and straight out and proud of it :)

[Zap-the-awesome]

I really liked that and it supports my own views. I dislike idiots giving the rest of us guys a bad stereotypical image.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

im glad u liked it. yer i know it sucks for all you good guys although speaking for myself i relise not all guys are like that most but not all. thanks again for reading and reviewing :)

[Craig2591]

Good poem. Gets the point across.

You used 'there' for 'their' a lot. Sorry, but that's a personal bug of mine (even though I do it myself sometimes).

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

my spelling is shocking im well aware lol but glad u liked the poem and glad it was at least good enough that u could understand it. Thats all that matters in the end

[Jake A Smiley]

I like the poem quite a lot :) As it states, men like that are rare, and unfortunately come and go. Such is life, I suppose. Anyway, good poem, though you may want to consider fixing the grammar errors. (Not claiming to be perfect or anything, just trying to offer a helpful suggestion, admittedly partially to assuage the grammar nazi inside of me)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks for liking it glad u enjoyed it. Im a hopeless speller im working on it most of the time cant be fucked with correcting it haha.

[Jake A Smiley]

Any time :)

[mark]

beautiful poem sweetie :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thanks babe :)

[mark]

anytime :)