Everyday(these crazy nights)

Nights are part of the our day when we truly express our feelings to ourselves.

Everyday I grew
Everyday I felt
Everyday with my breath
these eyes melt

Everyday I have cried on my pillow
Everyday I have seen sadness dwell
Everyday I have dreamt of you
Everyday I have been someone to know

Everyday I read, everyday I say
Everyday I believe, as long I stay
Everyday in same place, surrounded by walls
Everyday I grow a weaker heart

Everyday of my life, I have seen with you
Everyday I ask, should I believe in you?
Everyday I show, signs of death
Everyday I am out of my breath

Everyday I scream, your name out loud
Everyday I write it, on a new cloud
Everyday I have been, more of myself
Everyday this love, grows on well

Everyday I see a dream new
Everyday my faith grows in you
Everyday I curse this long distance
Everyday as I cry on my bed!

Reviews

[eighwoeifj]

Repetition certainly is one of a writer's tools, but be careful not to overdo it.

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

sure, Thanks for the suggestions :)

[Talismanic]

This makes me want to pour out my heart:) I feel so alone but my love for him will not leave me alone... ever

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

well said!! that's nice of you, thank you for such deep emotional comment

[Brandon Mathis]

Really nice, i love the 3rd stanza. The whole poem is great though!!

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you!! I am glad you liked it :)

[Brandon Mathis]

Always!!

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

:)

[ewest1220]

That was just beautiful I love what you did with the first word in every line. It really adds a nice tone to this piece. Very sad and emotional. Great job!

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Yeah, it was my idea of creating a different tone I am happy you liked it.. Thank you

[Irvette Dauphine]

i like this..
sad and full of emotional..
i like you always write 'everday i' at this poem :D

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

yes "Everyday I" was a catch phrase of this poem.. It makes me happy to know that you like my poems :)