Broken mirror- scream of a girl

A poem describing a girls emotion after being getting hurt in love!

If you had lived your way
Day before and today
If you were strong enough
Not to leave but to stay

Maybe this mirror still was whole
I could see us both
This wouldn't have scattered
Like my broken hope

Oh! I live my life in pain
Screams are echoing in my heart
It suddenly blows 
And burst out my veins

This broken mirror would have been
Stayed in an unbroken state but
By my screams it is shattered
Shattered as my faith

Life has left me no option
I am standing on my way
Its dark and its ugly
I have no one to stay

In pieces of this mirror
I see a broken fate
A huge smile on
A deep scar on my face

A try to build it up
Its broken as it stays
We could have been together
We could have it our way

Truths are now fading
Lies just stays
In darkness I scream
Shadows of my pain

No one knows my story
I am alone in my chase
Chase of nothingness
Nothingness all that stays

Broken like a mirror
I have been broken away
Just held by this flesh
This flesh is all that stays

Time to set my broken pieces
To go in their way
Time to take a sleep
And never be awake.

Reviews

[Castonovia]

Lyrical and so very heart catching with such darkness tinged with many depressing woes... emotional and well penned indeed, love every single line!!! :)

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you so much!!

[Castonovia]

No problem ;p

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

:)

[CHRIS ANDES]

interesting that you actually put yourself on a woman's shoes
your personality here is very different
=]

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

;p

[TheLittleOne]

Haunting and Breathtaking...This was stunning and dark and I loved every bit

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

I am glad you liked it :) thank you

[ewest1220]

Time to take a sleep, and never be awake.... Amazing my friend just amazing!

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you!! I am very happy and will always try to do better :)

[Brandon Mathis]

I really love this poem especially the 3rd through the 5th stanza are my favorite parts of it but once again a really good piece of work.

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you!! I am happy I was able to present a piece that people like :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

very deep and depresing..
i just can say good job and i like it..

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

I am glad you liked it :) Thank you

[Rika]

Very depressing and very deep. Amazing job!

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

Thank you!!! :)

[Rika]

no prob :)