My mistake is loving you...

My mistake is loving you...

A Poem by P.B
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A boy who is broken and started healing after his girl left him.

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Am not gonna update a status in fb
Don't worry,I won't grow any beard
I will be moving on from today;
Not gonna cling on you anymore.. 
I agree, my affection on you blindfolded me.
Falling for your charisma was ma fault
Loving you like my world was self pity
Waited for You was my lifetime stupidity 
The outings you urged me to take on every weekend
And in selfies, the closeness we embraced;
Made me to believe that it wasn't one-sided..!
Now,turned  all my dreams into nightmares
Toy you got played was my true feelings
The pain you gave ,can be eased off by tears 
Foolish love I held ,will get buried inside me
Moments we made gonna be put in my blacklist
I don't even wanna look back you, as my past
My wounded heart gonna be healed soon;
Thanks for the valuable lesson you taught to it
I started to see the reality since you left
Years would roll on and my life will go on;
I might get meet another person in future
And She won't be like my first mistake, I assure!

© 2016 P.B


Author's Note

P.B
I welcome corrections and inputs from readers and writers to make my writings better and perfect.

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Good work here. The emotion in this poem is amazing. I could feel every line. I know whats it is like to give something special to the wrong person. I done that many many times over and always got hurt in the end. I love how you start and finish this piece. Great job here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Good work here. The emotion in this poem is amazing. I could feel every line. I know whats it is like to give something special to the wrong person. I done that many many times over and always got hurt in the end. I love how you start and finish this piece. Great job here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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