At Twilight Zest

At Twilight Zest

A Poem by Ency Bearis


Somewhat that radiant rays of light
Right from the west frontier
Were being swallowed by darkness
Lilac color of clouds react to follow
Ditto to the event, clouds were amused
Confused though what's going on
Upon the time struck the hour of sun set
Yet clouds had to enjoy the tapestry of light
Outright the night time will swoon
Moon and stars subsequently will appear
Unclear if the stars, moon will like the clouds
Overclouds that at night will obstruct
Distract the moon and stars night exhibit
Inhibits the sky's diamonds will not be seen
Then it will be frustrating scenario
Oh, an anxious moment perhaps by sky objects
Subject to be respected at moment of twilight

Ency Bearis
All Rights Reserved 2013

© 2014 Ency Bearis


Author's Note

Ency Bearis
Thanks to all for the view

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I think that your descriptive talents are extremely powerful. Forgive me, but I identify a grammatical error in the your opening line, to say, Somewhat, is to be used as a noun, so you need to follow with another word, which is descriptive, e.g.; vibrant, tender. Overall however, really great :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful words and photo Ency...enjoyed the rhyme scheme also...rhyming the last word
with the first word of the next line...unique...Rose:)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on September 4, 2013
Last Updated on December 16, 2014
Tags: A Nature Poem

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Ency Bearis
Ency Bearis

Las Vegas, NV



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My profession is in Medical Field as a Registered Nurse, not a professional writer. It happened that I just like the land of words - The World Of Poetry. Being my hobby is inclined to Poetry, I publi.. more..

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