Splendid Deception

A little bit of humor

Splendid you enchanted me

Splendid and I was trapped to your beauty

Splendid to your lips sweet to kiss

Splendid for it was such a bliss

Splendid as I love your physique

Splendid, you're smart to speak with

 

But not splendid

what you did

You broke my heart

and broke my life apart

When you took all my money

and all my property

Do you think it's funny ?

 

 

 

 

 

Ency Bearis

All Rights Reserved 2010

Reviews

[vanessa cabrera]

bakit po?naloko ka po ba ng girl?lol

[Ency Bearis]

maraming beses na vanessa cabrera, salamat sa review

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Sorrowful words of a broken, betrayed partner, how terribly sad, nicely penned.

[ms. barrie]

A well deserved scathing, witty, with a venom dripping from your pen..aimed at the
Deceiver/s. Excellent job, Ency, I love this! 100/100 :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Gold digger... comes to mine with this write... I see why you put "Splendid" to give more impact as the reader gets a grip of this statement...

[Stella Armour]

not splendid at all when someone deceives us .... i loved the twist in the second verse Ency....

[gabrielle]

Ouch! to the one deceived and hooray! to the deceiver. Lol. true that, gold diggers and social climbers are lurking everywhere. be on guard your pockets and protect your assets =) witty write!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks gabrielle for the comments.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

It's not funny. It's not funny. It's not funnyyyy! LOL.

Akala ko heavy drama...hmp!
Nice nice, as ever. :)

[Ency Bearis]

O di ba heavy drama, damang dama naman, yon lang damang dama yong lugi. LOL! Salamat for stopping bye to this poem, Dhaye.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

My pleasure, Sir. :)

[Angi]

There are so many gold diggers out there! It is not funny at all! Nicely done, Ency. Angi~

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Angi for stopping by and I appreciate your input.

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is a powerful poem, Ency. I love the repetition of Splendid and I love the last line of the second stanza. I think many can relate to this poem. Great job!

[Ency Bearis]

I appreciate your comments Lori Carlson thanks a lot.