Measuring Your Love

 

 

I plunged

into the sea 

of your love

I was soaked

nearly reach 

the sea bed

it's beautiful

down there

captivating

but

I resurfaced

immediately

before

I'll be drowned

and someone

will tell me

that

I'm crazy

 

I'm happily

married

you know

that

 

 

 

Reviews

[vanessa cabrera]

tukso oh tukso layuan mo ako. nice one Ency, cute!

[Author Unknown]

Sensual but I like the moral lesson and discipline . Your best defense is not to linger . RUN!!!

[Author Unknown]

Sensual but Ilike the moral lesson and discipline . Your best defense is not to linger . RUN!!!

[Rita L. Sev]

Nice glimpse into temptation - and then out of it!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Rita L. Sev and yes in deed to be out of it.

[Stella Armour]

oooh..temptation, what a dilemma Ency my friend....

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Stella a different way of my concept.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Good! With a beautiful woman like in that image, you stood with honor and loyalty to your marriage. It's just one of the trials/tests of how faithfull you are with your love.

A wonderful poem, Sir. Love this!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Daisie for liking it. It's like a honest revelation ha.

[Pax]

a plunge almost indulge but never did for you've somehow realized this is a test in marraige life and faithfulness... it's a test of will on how you surpass the alluring beauty of nature's grace in our race... it's well conveyed in meaning and in thoughts... a very strong piece on how we handle each situations comes by that will really shatter a relationship...

a very good piece sir ency..
excellent!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks for the comments WillYam.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree . It is different from all your other forms but I like it a lot...Bravo

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Sami Khalil, for the comments.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)..........

[SyberRose]

Whoa...a different one for you...you got the point across...enjoyed Ency...Rose:)

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks SyberRose.

[gabrielle]

Almost unfaithful. I like the presentation of this piece sir. It's short yet speaks volume. The message is very commendable.

[Ency Bearis]

thanks for the comments gabrielle i appreciate it