Renegade

Inspired by Ernest Hemingway 6 words prose poem. A sort of Micropoetry.

she enamored

my emotion

then departed

Ency Bearis

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Author's Note

A Micropoetry

Reviews

[Marie]

Good...and I counted an even four syllables to each line...nicely formed.

[SyberRose]

I like this...Didnt know about the six word prose form...nicely done Ency:)

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks SyberRose.

[Cherrie Palmer]

well worded very good

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is different from all of your works...especially in the theme. This is about betrayal which is I think your first piece with this negative subject. Akala ko po, all about fun and love lang concepts nyo. Hehe. But it's an awesome poem. Though it is too short, the thought is complete and the emotion is fully revealed by those 6 words.
Good job po!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Daisie for reading this. I do had some concept like this and some spiritual poems too. I'll search some from my archives and post some of my spiritual works sometimes.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome po. I'll wait for those poems to be posted here.

[Pax]

wow ~ i haven't read any works of hemingway, but i heard his a great author in america.... poet pala sya..di ko alam..hehe

wow ~ again ;D ~ I'm always amaze on how our brian processed such poetry with very short verses ~ that is why i love haiku ~ and this is no different from a haiku ~ it's depth and profoundness is vast like the pic of the ocean...

~ in this i see a story ~ only a woman can stirred a wavelenght of emotion from a man!
100~

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks William ( pax) for the comments. Actually Ernest Hemingway was an author and journalist. Mostly of his works were Novel and famous for his quotes. But within the Literary Art some of the reader critics considered his qoutes like a prose poem with the ambiguous analogy he presented it. So some considered him a Poet in some instance.

[Pax]

most welcome sir... thanks for the info...