I Am Blind, Mute And Deaf

A Love Poem

 

Did I love you

because you are diamond

because you are a gold

because you are a star

adored by the world

 

because you are a song

that enlightened my soul

and as my solitude is my heaven

only song can awaken my soul to joy

 

I say no for whatever reason

all of those I can't see and hear

 

For whatever reason

I love you how

For whatever reason

I love you who you are

 

For whatever reason

the world will tell against you

no matter what

I don't listen

I only listen to my heart

 

For whatever past you have

I remain tongue-tied

For whatever particular darkness

you had been

I will not insist to see

For I will light up your life

with my body, soul and heart

 

 

 Ency Bearis

All Right Reserved 2010

Author's Note

Just a sort of passion I composed before.

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow, Sir Ency. I like this... your concept-breaker this time. Hehehe. Most of your poems are humorous, so I'm glad you have this one about faithful love. This was written 3 years ago, perhaps this is the reason why your wife married you. Lol. :)
Super Like!!!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks dhaye for liking it, I got more love poems. I do not write only humorous subject, but I got various concepts. I post some of them here.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Don't forget to sent me read request, Sir. I love Love Poems. In poetry, Love is my favorite subject, unlike in painting which can be human or nature.

[Ency Bearis]

I will dhaye. I'm still digging from my archives. I'll post one maybe today later.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Correction: Don't forget to send me read request, Sir. I love Love Poems. In poetry, Love is my favorite subject, unlike in painting which can be human or nature.

Haha... wrong tense of the verb sent

[Author Unknown]

This is really nice Ency . I can tell that you have poured your heart and soul on this piece . The passion and intensity of such chosen metaphor. It seems that you have been bitten by a love bug. No, it's about your muse . And how you relate to her if indeed you happened to fall inlove with her . You don't care what other say . It doesn't matter what they think and what they say . Like any other in your heart she deserves the best - you .

Fourth stanza " I love you for who you are " But it could denote a different meaning than what you originally intended . Regardless a slight variance . Good write Ency .

[SyberRose]

I really love that last verse...so pretty...as you must know by now I love romantic poetry ha...

The head and the heart has a constant battle sometimes...as i'm sure you know...Rose

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Syber Rose

[quinfinn]

this is beautifully worded and expressed with a great deal of personality. excellent writing !

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks quinfinn for your nice words, much I appreciate

[quinfinn]

you're welcome!

[Ency Bearis]

: )

[Angi]

I don't love you for any other reason than because you are you, your past doesn't concern me, either. Every woman wants these words! Lovely, Ency.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks a lot Angi for reading this poem.

[Angi]

My pleasure.

[Ency Bearis]

: )

[Stella Armour]

a beautiful affirmation of love Ency. i can feel the emotions coming through your words..

[Ency Bearis]

Thank You very much Stella .

[Rita L. Sev]

A perfect love poem, indeed - Love must sometimes be blind, and deaf, and mute - and the wise in love know this. A great write, Ency!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Rita L. Sev for your comments, I appreciate it.

[Saumya]

THIS IS LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Saumya for reading this poem.

[Saumya]

you are most welcomed, sir..!!

[Frieda P]

This reminds me of that song by Tim McGraw...Better Than I Used To Be.
'I'm learning who you've been, ain't who you've got to be'...this is about acceptance and seeing the best in that person you love. Nicely pen'd.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Frieda P for the nice words.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Ency.

[Megan A B]

A wonderful poem! I love the repition of 'For whatever' throughout - it really gets across that it's a passionate and unconditional love being described. Great work! :)

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Megan AB