The Caterpillar

A little bit of humor. One of my poems created for Children.

 

There's a boy whose name Gene

So excited to what he had seen

He run to his playmates at the playground

He tell his all friends what he had found

He says ; I saw this big, big, big Caterpillar

And you can't believe it, it's bigger than a car

All his friends are excited too to see the big monster

So they run to the place where to see the monster closer

They arrived to a road construction site

With the curiosity they asked " Where is it ? "

There's the Caterpillar; Gene said

Pointing to a bulldozer - that's it ; Gene added

That's the Caterpillar as my father said

 

Ency Bearis

All Rights Reserved 2013

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

a good choice of subject, many children are fascinated by caterpillars and insects in general :)

[Ency Bearis]

I appreciate your input SHEEMA HUQ, many thanks

[gabrielle]

Lol. Reminded me of the time when everything said by my parents were taken as gospel truth. This is adorable write, Kabayan.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Gabrielle for your comments and for your smile.

[Dhaye]

As usual, another cute and funny poem. :)

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks kabayan for telling me I'm cute .... oh err the poem I mean .... LOL ! Sincerely thanks for your comment with regards to the poem.

[Dhaye]

You're always welcome. :)

[Ency Bearis]

: )

[SyberRose]

haa...yes you got me...never thought of that until the end. Cute one Ency.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Syber Rose

[Marie]

Well, Gene was certainly telling the truth, wasn't he?

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Marie for viewing this poem.

[Pink Witch]

Reminds of the time when everything was a wonder!!

[Ency Bearis]

Oh yes, during that time of innocence and imaginary world was everything wonderful. Thanks Pink Witch.

[Prritiy]

its cute one, the innocence of child.... brings smiles.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Prritiy for telling me I'm cute... oh sorry, you mean the poem I think.

[Prritiy]

hahahahhaa :)

[Jorj Jie]

Nice One!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Jorj Jie.

[Magnolia]

I am smiling too Ency :)...Maggie

[Ency Bearis]

And to you too Maggie thanks for the smile, also to your comments in PF.

[Stella Armour]

haha, loved it, you had me fooled there for a while Ency, now i am smiling...

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Stella for I got your smile.