Over A Cup Of Coffee

Another kind of concrete poem I composed

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

Very clever style here, and the simple love story is engaging! I love your last words: "Love blended, blending still." Nice!

[Ency Bearis]

Oh, thanks a lot I don't know that you viewed it already and with delightful comments. I appreciate it.

[Jorj Jie]

Beautiful craft! :) I love how you did with the cup and all :)

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks a lot Jorj Jie for liking it. It takes a lot of editing to fit with the structure that drained my brain.

[Talal Hussain]

wow what a beautiful composition...very creative :-)

[Ency Bearis]

I am glad you like it Talal, I appreciate your comments.

[Magnolia]

How clever you are Ency, this is amazing ! ...'friendship brewed' and' love blended'...that's coffee for you...lol. Great work...Maggie

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Maggie, I 'm glad you like it. A clever work I can't post in the other site. What a big difference ha ? That's what told Stella too. Best Regards Maggie.

[Stella Armour]

oh wow, cleverly done Ency, you are right we couldn't do lovely things like this before. I like that you have used different colours, it looks easy but i admire you because it must have taken lots of work to do this.....

[Ency Bearis]

Oh yes, it's a lot of work to fit with the structure and should be in a sense per se to the title. It drained my brain. he,he, Thanks for your comments, Stella.

[Dhaye]

Wow! Sir Ency, this is another amazing piece. That's why I am your fan when it comes to different kinds of poetry. I am really inspired by your works, Sir. Thanks for sharing this. :)

[Ency Bearis]

Okay ba Ang concept . Maraming salamat for liking it dhaye

[Dhaye]

Ah, yes Sir Ency. Your love started from a cup of coffee, and is now as hot as your coffee. Since it's summer here, I will make a glass of cold juice. Lol:)

[Ency Bearis]

oo nga ano buti na lang hindi naging salabat na may sili....hehehe......tamang tama yan summer dyan pwede na yong ice coffee, o kaya halo - halo na lang.

[Dhaye]

Sana horse na lang tong internet connection ko dito sa Cavite...kasi po yung horse pag pinakain ng sili eh bumibilis. hehe. Bagal kasi eh.
Yun na po yung halu-halo...halu-halong topic na andito thread na to. Hehe.

[gabrielle]

The image is stunning. And the story in it is like a fairy tale. Keep on blending and sharing your works of art Kabayan. Wonderful piece.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks a lot gabrielle

[SyberRose]

You need to enter this in some kind of a contest haa...I know you would win Ency...
This is amazing...you really outdid yourself...SyberRose

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks SyberRose, maybe I will,

[Androglossia]

Wow. Just wow. This is excellent! The cup and the smoke is readily perceptive while maintaining the flow. I admit this is hard to achieve but you did it. Bows.

[Ency Bearis]

I am glad Maryanne M. that you like it. Thank you very much.

[Pax]

sweet tale ~ like a cup of a creamy coffee ~ i like this one kabayan... its an easy flow with a smooth touch of warm emotion... lovely and meaningful start of any relationship ~ a cup of coffee brings a new day! wonderful work kabayan...

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks pax I appreciate your nice words.