Over A Cup Of Coffee

Another kind of concrete poem I composed

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Shape poetry I think can be rather difficult to execute effectively and I think that you have certainly achieved this, what a dream to read and to appreciate the marvellous art form which you have created Ency, very well done!

[Ency Bearis]

Shape poetry or concrete poetry sometime can drain your brain to fit the words with structure and with significance. I have some of those posted here in this site - GOBLET OF WISHES and SIMILE TO PYRAMID - you can view it if you are interested SHEEMA HUQ. Many Thanks.

[Ency Bearis]

Sorry for the typo error - I mean - sometimes can drain...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

yes I shall back to view those soon :)

[ms. barrie]

wow, this is so eloquently romantic, sweet and i enjoy the creative originality in the style format you chose to type this in.

wonderful use of in your choice of words, very touching. lovely poem, Ency Bearis...thanks for sharing! I very much enjoyed this! 100 to 100 :) *favs.*

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks for your wonderful comments Barrie.joy

[ms. barrie]

you are very welcomed, Ency, pen on :)

[Em]

This is so cute. I love it, very well done!

[Ency Bearis]

Thank you Em for the compliments.

[Sami Khalil]

Great and artistic...:)

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Sami Khalil for your nice words

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Belle]

The content and the shape conform to each other.
It seems that you have mastered this form : shape poetry.

The thought conveyed in a form of narrative can be ordinary if not displayed in a way such this, but since you have presented it in a highly rhetoric manner, the poem became so catchy.

[Ency Bearis]

I appreciate your input with this piece. Thanks a lot. " Mabalos "

[Belle]

I remember this Sir Ency. I believe this was my first read from you. I became over-focused in term of form, if I will collect the memory it was because everyone from our friends were showing shaped poetry.

Re-reading the piece, the first line is a real capturer.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

So sweet!... the font and style of writing is unique and I quite enjoy the chemistry you have built in this piece...
My only suggestion is to enlarge the words... a bit small and hard to read..

But I thoroughly enjoyed this write! :)

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks for your comments and suggestion.I uploaded this from my original manuscript it is at font of 22, imagine how big are those words. Unfortunately in this site that the only visual font it accommodated. I tried to transcribe this here directly it won't do the structure I want. Sorry for the inconvenience Robbie.

[Ency Bearis]

Sorry for the typo error - I mean - that's the only visual font.....

[Prritiy]

this is so nice and the graphical representation is awesome and inspiring too, i am going to borrow your mind :)

[Ency Bearis]

Glad you like Prritiy, thans a lot. Of course you can borrow my brain if you want it. he,he,he.

[Prritiy]

thankyou :)

[Ency Bearis]

Sorry Prittiy for the err I did in my reply to you. I just noted it now. It should read - Glad you like it Prittiy.

[Prritiy]

It was absolutely ok and understood rightly too :)

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks, . That's the trouble commenting in my iphone.

[Prritiy]

never bother :)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Splendid read and write.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks a lot Brandon W.

[zainul]

Sipping a cup of love!
Wonderful text and graphics.
Poems stimulate fantastic art nowadays.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks zainul for your kind words,

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear friend.

[carol burgess romance]

love it

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks carol burgers romance