Over A Cup Of Coffee

Another kind of concrete poem I composed

Reviews

[Rogue]

Love the way this is structured. And the story within the prose is lovely.
A chance encounter in a crowded coffee shop, a cup, a smile, a chat.. And suddenly an unexpected road opened to the future. :)

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Rogue for the comments, I appreciated it.

[MOON]

A coffee cup of poetry , I can smell the enticing brew.lovely write original!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Moon

[Frieda P]

Wow, now that's impressive, two of my favorite things, poetry and coffee, combine the two, you've got a winner!

[Ency Bearis]

Many thanks for the compliments Frieda P. It just brewed in my thoughts and blended with the structure as I loved coffee too.

[Frieda P]

Ha brewed in your thoughts, I like that...my pleasure.

[Ency Bearis]

Yes it did ...... : )

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Creatively, designed... the word play is focused... and the story just goes with a cup of coffee... All... a reader must do is smell the aroma in the air of this verse... Well-crafted... Thanks for sharing...

[Ency Bearis]

Thank you very much Glen for reading this piece and for your wonderful comments. I appreciate it.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Nothing compares to this piece, stunning and captivating. I love it! Sir Ency.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Marc

[Akshat♥]

Awesome way to write a poem..nice concept..nice imagery:)
over a cup of coffee..we can do anything that we never expected..
I love the use of pink color..
Short and sweet poem :)
Keep writing!!

[rhythm&blues]

How clever! Enjoyed your poem too, very interesting and well done.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks rhythm&blues, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Saumya]

oh!!!!!!!!!!! this is surprisingly beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wonderful!!!!!1111

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks saumya srivastawa

[Vikrantsingh]

You do Magical Tricks Ency..
Truly magnificent piece of work.

Just word to add, I might sound lame - Its truly Magic... Over a cup of coffee.

Cheers!!!
Vikrantsingh Parmar

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Vikrantsingh Parmar for your kind words.

[Vikrantsingh]

You are welcome mate

[JulieÉmile]

Very beautiful and cute. Thoroughly enjoyable. Your hard work really paid off. This is a great poem. Thank you for such a beautiful piece of work.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks a lot JulieEmile for your comments. I appreciate it.