Over A Cup Of Coffee

Another kind of concrete poem I composed

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Life is beautiful when small things lead to priceless ones. Such as a lifelong friendship made over a cup of coffee. Amazingly told...

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it.

[AYVID N]

It was a pleasure!

[A. Amos]

Interesting piece of work and what is a magic of having a cup of coffee with someone, you define well good job...thank you for sharing

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks for the review A. Amos, your comments is such an inspiration.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend

[Great Aunt Astri]

It is amazing what a cup of coffee can do ... my very best wishes. As you stirred you were stirred to use your courage!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Great Aunt Astri for your comments and I appreciate it.

[Michael G. Smith]

Blending still, the two words that defined the whole poem. awesome job on the mug of coffee picture.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks for the visit and for the wonderful comments Michael G. Smith, I appreciate it.

[Everett DeValle]

Hello Ency...Kumusta Po...I really enjoyed your poem...it embodied a creativeness and uniqueness that solemn ode to coffee. Awesome.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks, Everett DeValle, " maraming salamat" for the comments and liking the poem.

[Everett DeValle]

Walang anuman, Po...it was truly a pleasure of mine to read. :)

[Chris]

The perceived image was well formed. The thoughts were both understood and appreciated

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Chris the comments, I appreciate it.

[Brian]

I really liked the way you used coffee terms to describe your love and friendship. Also, along with using coffee terms to describe your relationship, you two bonded over coffee which made the coffee terms all the more appropriate. "friendship brewed," and "stirred me" are my two favorite excerpts. Great job!!

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Brian for your comments and I appreciate it.

[C Mack Lewis]

A lovely and beautiful poem! It captures the tenuous emotion and nervousness of those first moments of making that connection with a stranger that we've all experienced. Nicely done...

[Ency Bearis]

thank you very much C Mark Lewis for your comments

[Angi]

This is so good, Ency. I am a coffee lover, so I appreciate the effort this took all the more. Lovely work!

[Ency Bearis]

I appreciate your comments Angi with this poem. Thanks a lot.

[Leslie Philibert]

I like concrete poetry, it is a poetic style that deserves to be taken seriously. A good write here..

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Leslie for your comments