Simile To Pyramid

An insightful concept to live by

A

dream

cherished desire

by all person with importance

or significance to the fate of person's life

but there are challenges can be encountered to that

sometimes it's like the pyramid with steep slope to reach the top

yet there's like a ladder to use, and climb steps by steps to the top of pyramid

that' is the self determination, and go on with patience, diligence, persistence to succeed

Ency Bearis

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Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I enjoyed the content, your pyramid had potential to be manipulated further of you want precision ( via font and tweaking I guess), though I that part of the charm of this poem is that the shape of the pyramid is imperfect, very well done :)

Please take a look at CELLPHONECHIC - A shape poem and A FAIR ATTEMPT, (
not quite but potentially is one) in my archive if you have time, sometimes they can evolve by sheer error I find, much thanks

[Holly Mason]

well different from a beer need*)but you express your personal thoughts very nicely in all that I have read of you
success is not always easy-it takes diligence
we will wear out during our climb but keep going great thoughts
thank you for your pyramid and for sharing

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Holly Mason, for your review.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

This insanely brilliant :) you give justice in this piece. Stunning and great structure. Thanks for sharing Sir Ency :)

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Kabayan Marc.

[SyberRose]

Very creative poem and wonderful image of a pyramid...Nicely done...SyberRose

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks SyberRose .

[gabrielle]

indeed, it takes great determination, patience diligence and persistence to achieve one's goal or dream. The pyramid-like image created with your words gave me a mental picture of a person climbing the ladder to success. This is a very motivating piece kabayan.

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks gabrielle it's indeed a motivating verses.

[Dhaye]

Concrete poetry...
This is nice. I haven't tried it yet. Maybe one of these days.

[Ency Bearis]

Oh yes dyahe you're right a concrete poetry I got some of it, and thanks again for your input.

[Madhoora]

This is awesome

[Ency Bearis]

Thanks Madhoora