As green as her eyes

Death and rebirth

Her pale face glares as a moon
drowning in a black ink ocean.
The stars in her green eyes are dying out soon,
quitely, still in motion.

Under the green grassfield likewise;
flows her hair---the color of the sand.
Her breath yields to the skies,
whereas the earth holds her hand.

Even in eternal slumber, she smiles;
as her lips are roses filling the world,
wide--extended for miles,
cherishing the gift of the lord.

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Author's Note

Reviews are welcomed.

Reviews

[Kat-Marie Berti]

I love your use of colors in this poem, very vivid. Another great read :)

[chillz]

wow
love it so much
great work
{{background music is pretty awesome to

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I adore this

[Art Freeman]

love this piece for personal reasons...the use of colors...the rhyme...personification of nature...the respect and admiration with which this piece is written...i enjoyed it thoroughly...thank you...

[Tate Morgan]

I truly love the rhyme rhyme and meter are the key to good work i my ,mind

[Joe Medoff]

nice background music

[Deviant Works]

Ahh, this was beautiful... I agree with the others the imagery in this piece is breathtaking. The second stanza is my absolute favorite, yet the entire poem had a very serene feel, almost as if I was drifting as I read it. I am listening to the song now which truly compliments this piece, slow and warming much like the words of your poem. I must say this is excellent, one of my favorite poem and song combos. Once again, just beautiful...

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words made the poem come alive. I like the description of the nature and the positive ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Silence]

Whoa, you had crazy good imagery! I think black ink ocean was the best!